HeART Dreams
About attaining your full potential...46 total reviews
Comment from gazzagodbod
this struck chords with me my friend when i left school my dad gave me a list of five acceptable jobs lol none of which i am today lol great work you are so talented xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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this struck chords with me my friend when i left school my dad gave me a list of five acceptable jobs lol none of which i am today lol great work you are so talented xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 28-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
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Thank you Gary. CG
Comment from Mai Mai
This is a touching and interesting piece. I like that it encourages us to encourage our children. I also like that it seems to imply that we are our children. Great job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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This is a touching and interesting piece. I like that it encourages us to encourage our children. I also like that it seems to imply that we are our children. Great job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a wonderful review Mai Mai. CG
Comment from skye
Teach the children, allow them the freedom to choose, to learn, to achieve, and to be themselves.
Excellent poem, with wonderful imagery and a very important message.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Teach the children, allow them the freedom to choose, to learn, to achieve, and to be themselves.
Excellent poem, with wonderful imagery and a very important message.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a lovely and understanding review. CG
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
I'll take parents like that if you please! A great poem with a hopeful theme. Let children be who they are and encourage. The rhyming scheme creates a wonderful flow. The artwork goes well with this poem theme. A very enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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I'll take parents like that if you please! A great poem with a hopeful theme. Let children be who they are and encourage. The rhyming scheme creates a wonderful flow. The artwork goes well with this poem theme. A very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review. CG
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You are very welcome. MN :)
Comment from dhee khaye
Great job. Thank you for the note mystery writer. This poem has a potential to get the crown. Wishing you all the luck. i love your work. Easy to understand and most importantly, very imaginative. Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Great job. Thank you for the note mystery writer. This poem has a potential to get the crown. Wishing you all the luck. i love your work. Easy to understand and most importantly, very imaginative. Good job!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a lovely review. CG
Comment from Titanx9
Outstanding poem and is well told! Too many parents live vicariously through their children and in the end, nobody's happy. Your poem is well-rhymed and tells a poignant story. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Outstanding poem and is well told! Too many parents live vicariously through their children and in the end, nobody's happy. Your poem is well-rhymed and tells a poignant story. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2012
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Thank you Titanx9 for your lovely review and for understanding this message. CG
Comment from squid152
Nice internal rhyme with admission and mathmatition Big ending with the great couplet. I liked the young hearts and passion flow.-Gary
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Nice internal rhyme with admission and mathmatition Big ending with the great couplet. I liked the young hearts and passion flow.-Gary
Comment Written 18-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Thank you, Gary, for a lovely review. CG
Comment from artemis53
Great author note, CG. Yes. I do identify with the subject and allowed my Sons to breathe and took them to see everything imaginable. I am blessed. When I wish, I can still be that free spirit.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Great author note, CG. Yes. I do identify with the subject and allowed my Sons to breathe and took them to see everything imaginable. I am blessed. When I wish, I can still be that free spirit.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a great review and I am glad you are helping your sons to reach their full potential. CG
Comment from AddrieWritesThings
Beautifully written. The what if quality is brilliant and I love the concept here. The poem flows nicely and the stanzas keep the pace quiet eloquently. Very nice work. (Also, I hate math.)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Beautifully written. The what if quality is brilliant and I love the concept here. The poem flows nicely and the stanzas keep the pace quiet eloquently. Very nice work. (Also, I hate math.)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Thank you for a lovely review. CG
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading this one and agree with your message. We need to let our children be who that want to be and maybe were meant to be rather than what we want them to be. Very well written,
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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I enjoyed reading this one and agree with your message. We need to let our children be who that want to be and maybe were meant to be rather than what we want them to be. Very well written,
Comment Written 18-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2012
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Thank you for your lovely review. CG
