Where Men Shouldn't Wander
The sequel to 'Too Close for Comfort'45 total reviews
Comment from JM daSilva
Wanna know what's funny? I was writing about tsunamis, you will see later in my book, and the you wrote tsunami. And to me, this sentence alone, "Tsunamis in his stomach and tornados in his head.", deserves six stars.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Wanna know what's funny? I was writing about tsunamis, you will see later in my book, and the you wrote tsunami. And to me, this sentence alone, "Tsunamis in his stomach and tornados in his head.", deserves six stars.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for the six! What a coincidence, we have tsunamis in common, tho I'm sure you won't be placing them in your character's head. Thanks again for the six.
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You're welcome. You will see if you continue reading my book. lol.
Comment from Capricorn30
A wonderful, well-written fairy poem;
I like the concept of brothers seeking revenge for the fairies which they believe have made them ill;
A delightful smooth-flowing rhyme
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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A wonderful, well-written fairy poem;
I like the concept of brothers seeking revenge for the fairies which they believe have made them ill;
A delightful smooth-flowing rhyme
Comment Written 27-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you liked my fairy poem. This one was fun to write. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from gudbjorg
I found your poem rather interesting as it is about fairies and their spiritual influence on us humans. In my mind and I believe they're beings of light and stand for all that's good but sadly many choose to follow it but instead the opposite which is the tale of this story. Thank God for the chosen few who have the integrity to follow what is honest, true and loving. It has a good flow with an easy rhyming scheme.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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I found your poem rather interesting as it is about fairies and their spiritual influence on us humans. In my mind and I believe they're beings of light and stand for all that's good but sadly many choose to follow it but instead the opposite which is the tale of this story. Thank God for the chosen few who have the integrity to follow what is honest, true and loving. It has a good flow with an easy rhyming scheme.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2012
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I like to think fairies are basicly good, but not helpless. Anyone who tries to harm them is likely to have a very bad day. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
Where Men Shouldnt Wander!!
What a story in a poem. You
did a good job with this. I
like the flow of this. Thanks
for sharing. Well done.Deorre
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Where Men Shouldnt Wander!!
What a story in a poem. You
did a good job with this. I
like the flow of this. Thanks
for sharing. Well done.Deorre
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a delightful and very charming poem - the rhyme is wonderful and it flows well but what is most enchanting is the engaging tale you tell of fairies and their fierce protectiveness of their place in the world! I LOVED it!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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What a delightful and very charming poem - the rhyme is wonderful and it flows well but what is most enchanting is the engaging tale you tell of fairies and their fierce protectiveness of their place in the world! I LOVED it!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you liked it. Making the fairies angry turned out to be a very bad idea. Thanks for the kind words and the wonderful review.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written story/poem. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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This is very well written story/poem. It has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I;m so glad you liked my poem. It was fun writing it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
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You're welcome, Cindy. Charlie
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. It is a great parable. Don;'t mess with the magic. You won't know who to blame when you start acting like a fool. Great work.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. It is a great parable. Don;'t mess with the magic. You won't know who to blame when you start acting like a fool. Great work.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dodey
Brilliant story, told in great choice words and perfect rhyming couplets..Clear imagery all through and a sound message..don't fool around with fairies...Would make a fab childrens book if it already hasnt been done,..Bravo my friend...a wonderful read..
Kind Regards to you...Dee
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Brilliant story, told in great choice words and perfect rhyming couplets..Clear imagery all through and a sound message..don't fool around with fairies...Would make a fab childrens book if it already hasnt been done,..Bravo my friend...a wonderful read..
Kind Regards to you...Dee
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Children's picture books are really hard to sell, but it may be worth a try. Thanks so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Haha! Now I know how to set up a trap for fairies if ever there be a need. This is adorable and your language is such fun to read. I'm laughing at the line: but if the mushrooms stick so will we. Oh, dear, I'm at the end now and realize I should never mess with fairies. Well done. Regards, Lou
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Haha! Now I know how to set up a trap for fairies if ever there be a need. This is adorable and your language is such fun to read. I'm laughing at the line: but if the mushrooms stick so will we. Oh, dear, I'm at the end now and realize I should never mess with fairies. Well done. Regards, Lou
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a little hard to come up with a suitable punishment for those two bozos. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from l.raven
Never mess with mother nature. And never mess with fairies. Very well written. I loved your story. Enjoyed the read. and the perfect picture.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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Never mess with mother nature. And never mess with fairies. Very well written. I loved your story. Enjoyed the read. and the perfect picture.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Those little fairies can be grouchy when you try to catch them with flypaper and put them in jars. Thanks for the great review.
