The Bucket List
Adapted from my blog76 total reviews
Comment from Newsome
Hello Jan...This is such a wonderful story. I am sorry I didn't get around to reading it till now, back problems and the like. What a special person you are for thinking of yor friend this way, especially in light of the situation. Most would not do what you did and perhaps eevn resentment. It is certaily refreshing to see such a kind hearted gesture, both toward your friend and Britany. God does hear and sends us messages and answers to our prayers in many ways...Again,a very heartfelt write.
Newsome
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2013
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Hello Jan...This is such a wonderful story. I am sorry I didn't get around to reading it till now, back problems and the like. What a special person you are for thinking of yor friend this way, especially in light of the situation. Most would not do what you did and perhaps eevn resentment. It is certaily refreshing to see such a kind hearted gesture, both toward your friend and Britany. God does hear and sends us messages and answers to our prayers in many ways...Again,a very heartfelt write.
Newsome
Comment Written 03-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2013
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Thank you so very much! I was delighted to get online tonight and find your review and your very kind words and the six stars. Thanks so much! :-) Glad you enjoyed it.
Jan
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Hello Jan!
It's so wonderful to see your post. I almost choked when I saw your name in my fyi list. :)
what a wonderful story. Now, why didn't I know you had a blog?
I must see it. I'd follow you like a stalker. haha
How is your friend doing now?
Love you,
Jewell
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Hello Jan!
It's so wonderful to see your post. I almost choked when I saw your name in my fyi list. :)
what a wonderful story. Now, why didn't I know you had a blog?
I must see it. I'd follow you like a stalker. haha
How is your friend doing now?
Love you,
Jewell
Comment Written 29-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Oh, Jewell, thank you so much. http://janilouscorner.blogspot.com/
That's it, I think. I don't post there often enough, and much of what I do post there is also here on FanStory. :-)
My friend is doing okay -- still fighting the cancer, and still hoping for a cure. Love you, too.
Jan
Comment from TDLRasmar
It was a very easy read. The ideas were well thought out and logically presented. And, yes, Disney World is expensive. We went several years back and stayed on the premises. There are many lakes throughout the complex. I inquired about fishing in them and found it was allowed but you had to rent the poles from Disney and I think you had to pay for the fish. It is a top amusement park but very pricey. Anyway, nice story.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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It was a very easy read. The ideas were well thought out and logically presented. And, yes, Disney World is expensive. We went several years back and stayed on the premises. There are many lakes throughout the complex. I inquired about fishing in them and found it was allowed but you had to rent the poles from Disney and I think you had to pay for the fish. It is a top amusement park but very pricey. Anyway, nice story.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) Yes, Disney is expensive, but worth it in my view. LOL
Jan
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Jan, I love this story. I am so glad you were able to let go of things of the past. You made so many people happy with the gift of forgiveness. The flow of story was so easy to follow, Thank you for sharing, Shirley
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Dear Jan, I love this story. I am so glad you were able to let go of things of the past. You made so many people happy with the gift of forgiveness. The flow of story was so easy to follow, Thank you for sharing, Shirley
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, Shirley. I deeply appreciate your kind words.
Jan
Comment from jjstar
What a beautiful story you get to tell. I'm so sorry about your friend--even more amazing she is your ex's wife! We just lost a dear friend of ours to cancer. He had battled for 2 years and had a clean scan just six months ago. He went to the doctor one day because he was just tired. The doctor told him the cancer was back and there was no hope of further treatment. Before we could even do anything, but see him, he was gone. I'm so happy, as I can see you are that you got to spend this precious time with her. I know you'll think about it often and your kids will benefit greatly from lessons learned from this bittersweet experience.
Great job!
In the first paragraph the tenses change midstream. You might want to keep them all in one for a more continuous flow.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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What a beautiful story you get to tell. I'm so sorry about your friend--even more amazing she is your ex's wife! We just lost a dear friend of ours to cancer. He had battled for 2 years and had a clean scan just six months ago. He went to the doctor one day because he was just tired. The doctor told him the cancer was back and there was no hope of further treatment. Before we could even do anything, but see him, he was gone. I'm so happy, as I can see you are that you got to spend this precious time with her. I know you'll think about it often and your kids will benefit greatly from lessons learned from this bittersweet experience.
Great job!
In the first paragraph the tenses change midstream. You might want to keep them all in one for a more continuous flow.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, and I will take a look at the tense change. :-)
Many thanks for the fine review.
Jan
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Janilou, after my second battle in four years with prostate cancer. I began, while I had the time, energy and money, I began my bucket list. I went to Ireland for 18 days, took one trip to mainland China and then to San Francisco. I'm never to be cured. These memories are still very vivid.
This is an excellent feel good story. One that will last a lifetime in your memory bank. What you did for your friend brought tears to my eyes and tugged at my heartstrings. I want to thank you for what you did without blinking. Very well written and thank you for sharing this story,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Janilou, after my second battle in four years with prostate cancer. I began, while I had the time, energy and money, I began my bucket list. I went to Ireland for 18 days, took one trip to mainland China and then to San Francisco. I'm never to be cured. These memories are still very vivid.
This is an excellent feel good story. One that will last a lifetime in your memory bank. What you did for your friend brought tears to my eyes and tugged at my heartstrings. I want to thank you for what you did without blinking. Very well written and thank you for sharing this story,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for the six stars and the fantastic review. I deeply appreciate it. I believe my dad is also struggling with the cancer you mention. I'm glad you are still here with us. :-)
Jan
Comment from Terror2s
The value of your friendship really shined through in this piece. You seem like a special person to me bale to put your past behind you and focus on the joys of your friends and family. I am so glad you had such a memorable trip. T2
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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The value of your friendship really shined through in this piece. You seem like a special person to me bale to put your past behind you and focus on the joys of your friends and family. I am so glad you had such a memorable trip. T2
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Many thanks for your kind words and the great review.
Jan
Comment from Littlegirl38732
That is so sad! I am glad the character in your story was able to forgive and not hold grudges. It is hard to do sometimes. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting this.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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That is so sad! I am glad the character in your story was able to forgive and not hold grudges. It is hard to do sometimes. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for posting this.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Many thanks for the great review. I really appreciate it.
Jan
Comment from vigournet
This is a really warming story, and encouragement to trust in the Lord. I love, not only the story, but the way you have written it: I felt present every moment. I too have experienced God's grace and seen His mercy. Well done for telling your story so honestly and powerfully.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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This is a really warming story, and encouragement to trust in the Lord. I love, not only the story, but the way you have written it: I felt present every moment. I too have experienced God's grace and seen His mercy. Well done for telling your story so honestly and powerfully.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Jan
Comment from THE FREAK
The tantalizing realities of death once faced an ugly expression to those whom embraced a carefree, never settle for today lifestyle. Now, within the mass chaos of western explosion; idolizing false influences; encourages those of a by-curious nature to explore temptations beyond the laws of science and realism. Leading to an insightful little memoir, detailed to a happy ending of wanting and getting. Clearly highlighted within the subtle, gentle notes; flowing with ease upon the next paragraph. Gliding your tongue to a world, once plagued by harsh, crude landscaped swampland; now, an economic tourist giant, branded 'The families number one holiday hotspot.' Reviving a memory once forgotten within the eyes and hearts of those baring a childish character, to a happy place one wishes to be before, one dies. Heavily noting; the explosive culture of buck-listing! Implying a fragment thought throughout the world...! Should we all have a bucket-list? My answer is yes. If circumstances arrive, i firmly say yes. Though, tightening notions cripples the concept of a bucket-list. Can we do all that we want? No! So, a life worth living, is worth living for something you really want. Summarising, 'something to live for...'. And finally concluding this, offers one more note. Does this highlight the concepts of being spoilt? To truly understand this note; one has to read 'The Bucket-list,' to grasp the notion of 'Having something to life for.'
THE FREAK
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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The tantalizing realities of death once faced an ugly expression to those whom embraced a carefree, never settle for today lifestyle. Now, within the mass chaos of western explosion; idolizing false influences; encourages those of a by-curious nature to explore temptations beyond the laws of science and realism. Leading to an insightful little memoir, detailed to a happy ending of wanting and getting. Clearly highlighted within the subtle, gentle notes; flowing with ease upon the next paragraph. Gliding your tongue to a world, once plagued by harsh, crude landscaped swampland; now, an economic tourist giant, branded 'The families number one holiday hotspot.' Reviving a memory once forgotten within the eyes and hearts of those baring a childish character, to a happy place one wishes to be before, one dies. Heavily noting; the explosive culture of buck-listing! Implying a fragment thought throughout the world...! Should we all have a bucket-list? My answer is yes. If circumstances arrive, i firmly say yes. Though, tightening notions cripples the concept of a bucket-list. Can we do all that we want? No! So, a life worth living, is worth living for something you really want. Summarising, 'something to live for...'. And finally concluding this, offers one more note. Does this highlight the concepts of being spoilt? To truly understand this note; one has to read 'The Bucket-list,' to grasp the notion of 'Having something to life for.'
THE FREAK
Comment Written 28-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much for the great review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Jan
