Comment from Dodey

Excellent

Another great humorous poem..with clear images. A new twist on an old story of Goldilocks and the Three
Bears, by having the bears eat her for dinner lol..

Congratulations on winning the contest, very much deserved.
Kind regards to you..Dee

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thanks, Dee - glad you enjoyed.
Steve

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Steve, Congratulations on your contest win
a solid acrostic for Goldilocks and the Three Bears
excellent use of rhyming couplets
and great cadence when read aloud
nice touches of alliteration like fine fare
Excellent humor in your retelling of this old story - love the little commentary like Oh crap when she breaks the chair LOL
fairy story bruins/ruins - that passage is inspired :-)
poor sleeping sinner - she paid dearly for her trespasses I see. LOL Great gallows humor ending :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thanks, Brooke - glad you enjoyed.
Steve

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

The last part made me laugh I like the idea that goldy became their dinner very well told I like the picture thank you for sharing and congratulations on winning the contest

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you!
Steve

Comment from poetster

Excellent

Hello,
You did a great job on this poem. Congratulations on winning this contest and continued good writing.
God Bless,
Fairon Spears

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Fairon - thank you for the kind words.
Steve

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

This is delightful! You put a smile on my face and a giggle escaped my mouth! I love your rhythmic meter and your perfect rhymes. Great job. Congrats on winning this contest!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thanks, Joy - glad to give a giggle!

Steve

Comment from amada

Excellent

This is a very nice work. If I have your permission i would like to send it to my grandaughter, age 8, I know she will have a kick of it. A very well deserved win.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you - of course you can share it - I did think of adding an alternative ending in case anyone didn't want poor Goldy to get eaten, but I reckon most kids will lap it up.
Steve

Comment from mizzkris20

Excellent

This is a cute poem...good luck in the contest
Become quite cross if someone ruins
Everything they planned to eat
And Baby's darling little seat.
Regrettably the sleeping sinner
Served the bears for early dinner!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from Simple Reflection

Excellent

Priceless! It is no wonder that you have all of those awards tagged to the bottom of this brilliant acrostic! This poem has it all: rhyme, cadence, and a little alliteration.

Absolutely wonderful! Congratulations!

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you for your very kind words - glad you enjoyed.
Steve

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

great piece and I see how you got the award. Congratulations. I thank you for this little twist on this old story. Very delightful.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you!
Steve

Comment from ameen786

Excellent

A fine illustration of an acrostic the site should use on its front page; my friend, congratulations! The best I have ever read on site, a delightful poem/story in flowing verses that are quite pleasing to read again and again; that clever ending makes this brilliant write a memorable one; again, congratulations and thanks for the treat.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2012

Thank you, Kamran.
Be careful with those words of praise, my friend, my head may swell and then my hat won't fit!
Steve