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Curtain Call

So happy to be stuck on you.

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Comment from frogbook
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Steamy and so well written. Of course, one had to love the surprise ending the best. Especially after I called the guy some bad names along the way.. Haha. Really excellent as expected.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2015


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2015
    Ahhh. Thank you so much for going back into my archives for this one, Joanne. It is seldom done for some reason. I tend to forget that I used to write a lot of short stories and poetry. The one I am most proud of is a thing called "The Interview" written over four years ago. It is in the portfolio. It was published and if you like surprise endings, you may like this one. Bless you and thanks again for taking the time. Bob
Comment from Thatguypk
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Nicely told story, with a good message, even down to the fun of role-playing!! Very sensuous, without becoming pornographic. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
    Hi, Pk..Thanks so much, but quite honestly....I need reviews on my current work....prose. Thanks anyway. Bob
Comment from Teresa Paul
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That was really good. I didn't see that situation happening you don't know what great lengths I just went through to avoid saying one word. This is something that all women should do about every 6 months of their marriage to keep the romance alive. HOT! Yours, Teresa.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    Thanks so much, Teresa. LOL...You liked this, eh? It was for a contest, I think. I don't think I won either. LOL..I am so happy to see you perusing my stuff. Wow! Hey,Tell me what you think of one of my faves if you can...It's called "The Interview" (Way back about three years, I think...I almost had it published.) Close only counts in horseshoes and grenades tho.) (I hope you catch on...because It's a thinking person's ending. Some didn't get it all the way. .Surprise! :) Bob
reply by Teresa Paul on 02-Sep-2013
    As soon as I finish "Falling Up The Stairs" I am on Homecoming. Then when I finish this book I will read "The Interview" I promise. It can't be as good as the two books I am reading now. It would be impossible. Yours, Teresa.
Comment from marilyo
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Oh wow, what a read. Married coupes really have to find time alone. These guys had to be creative to find the hot coals of desire again. The suspense was intense, mind you. but thank God it was his wife. Whew!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
    Why of course it was his wife. what sort of a romance story would it be with a guy cheating on his love? LOL..Thanks so much, Marilyo. Bob
Comment from Darla9
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Arnie was horny. - nice start, made me giggle

if I have my way I'll spread sauce all over you and work you like a rib- LOL

I was kind of expecting the ending. I did not believe that he would cheat on his beloved wife. So the only criticism I have - the ending was predictable. But it was a very good read. Well done :)

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
    Thanks so much, Darla. LOL...You are in the fifty percent that did "get it" early....others said as I would hope that it didn't really matter...it was just fun to read...and I really apppreciate your time and review in any event. Blessings, Bob
Comment from alexisleech
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Excellent! I knew there would be an unexpected punchline, just had no idea it would be that! What is it about getting away from the norm that can spice up a neglected love life? I hope lots of couples read this and take note! A very enjoyable read, and one I'm glad I read in the morning! Alexis x

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
    Goodmorning,Alexis. Thanks for reading and reviewing thislittle story. I am encouraged that you liked it. Blessings...Bob
Comment from Allezw2
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Master Mastery,

Indeed.

A definitely convoluted way to pep up a flagging romance.

Between the Olive Garden and their Hernando's Hideaway - Ole'!

Nicely done,

Fantasist

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
    Thanks so much, Allezw...Haven't heard from you in a long time, but your input is always good to receive. :) Bob
reply by Allezw2 on 17-Oct-2012
    You're quite welcome.
Comment from Gungalo
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Ohhhh boy, pretty good out of all that they finally mae a pack to make time for each other. Isn't that enough? I'm sure they will too.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
    Hi, Pam. Thanks for your review. Bob
Comment from Eleanor Buron
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Here I thought the story was all heated up with an illicit affair - Arnie and the fortuneteller. The fortune teller is Maureen. LOL - Great U-turn in action mmakes for a very happy ending. The elements of a good story are all present. Typical family with typical time management problems; but their creative problem solving is not typical. It works and makes for a delightful surprise ending.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
    Thanks so much, Elly. I appreciate your time and input as always. Bob
reply by Eleanor Buron on 18-Oct-2012
    You're welcome. ;)
Comment from Cornelius2000
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What a fun short story. There I was, starting to feel a bit disappointed in Arnie, that he would allow himself to be seduced by this wiley fortuneteller, and BAM, all-of-a-sudden realized that I'd been HAD.
My only thought on this story is one little word that somehow seems awkward and out of place in the midst of all the elegant writing. That is the chair that seemed to "beckon his ass."
But of course that doesn't take away from what is a splendid short story.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2012


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2012
    Hi,Dave. Thanks so much for your review. You are absolutely correct and I changed that line. Funny how things like that slip by no matter what. See what I mean about reading aloud? LOL...Bob