Derriere
Paying Homage to a great ASSet ...44 total reviews
Comment from charlyann
I blushed a bit, I'm a prude. This is one of ..if not the best, derriere poems I've read today, hell, probably all month..and to top it off you used the word arse in your description...I love the word arse and use it often
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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I blushed a bit, I'm a prude. This is one of ..if not the best, derriere poems I've read today, hell, probably all month..and to top it off you used the word arse in your description...I love the word arse and use it often
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Blush shmush...I've read your stuff. I'm tame. LOL
Loved your review and yep I've always preferred and ARSE over and ASS anyday...but I'm Straylian! LMAO
Cheers and thanks so much C.
P
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the surprise ending. I thought you were speaking as a man until the very end. You got quite a laugh from me. You did this by using the cheeky subject, the derriere. Great work.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the surprise ending. I thought you were speaking as a man until the very end. You got quite a laugh from me. You did this by using the cheeky subject, the derriere. Great work.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2012
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Many thanks elliejean. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Glad I fooled you with the bloke talk haha!
Cheers Closet
Comment from Amfunny
Hey, my friend.. I see you are still here and still writing that work of yours that I love so much. Excellent job on this... gave me a chuckle. I see my other friend, PercivalJack, is no longer on the site. :( Hope you are doing well, my friend.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Hey, my friend.. I see you are still here and still writing that work of yours that I love so much. Excellent job on this... gave me a chuckle. I see my other friend, PercivalJack, is no longer on the site. :( Hope you are doing well, my friend.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Hey friend, thanks so much. I appreciate you dropping by.
Cheers P
Comment from MAMONIA
I never even guess until you said it at
the end. This is so totally clever of you.
I love the rhythm, the flow and the power
of your description and dialogue.
I cannot believe that you even doubted for
a second that this poem was indeed fantastic!
Wonderful work. I enjoyed it so much.
Thanks for sharing.
Marie
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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I never even guess until you said it at
the end. This is so totally clever of you.
I love the rhythm, the flow and the power
of your description and dialogue.
I cannot believe that you even doubted for
a second that this poem was indeed fantastic!
Wonderful work. I enjoyed it so much.
Thanks for sharing.
Marie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much. Sorry for tardy response. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Cheers P
Comment from Lastamen
A profound undertaking that brings the rear to the front and focus of attention. Oh to be that fortunate chair! Great fun. Good fortune in the contest.
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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A profound undertaking that brings the rear to the front and focus of attention. Oh to be that fortunate chair! Great fun. Good fortune in the contest.
Till the last amen
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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LOL Thanks for a fun review my friend.
Cheers closet xo
Comment from Deejharrington
Have you been reading Fifty Shades of Grey??? LOL, just kidding. Loved the picture. If its too much for some, they can go f**k themselves. Loved the play on words and the surprise ending. A chair, indeed:)
deb
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Have you been reading Fifty Shades of Grey??? LOL, just kidding. Loved the picture. If its too much for some, they can go f**k themselves. Loved the play on words and the surprise ending. A chair, indeed:)
deb
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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LOL Funny you should say that...right beside me is 3 books...I am ABOUT to read them...
Thanks so much for the terrific review.
Cheers P
xo
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One is OK, she repeats too much, book two is a little better, bk 3 is the written the best of the all of them:)
deb
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Thanks for the heads up deb.
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Comment from psalmist
Lol, what a clever ending! This poem scintillated the whole way through with wonderfully sensuous images. Great double entendre "Your flesh is silk, my wood is real," that had me laughing when I realized it was the chair talking. Good luck in the contest. Linda (glad to have you back, by the way)
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Lol, what a clever ending! This poem scintillated the whole way through with wonderfully sensuous images. Great double entendre "Your flesh is silk, my wood is real," that had me laughing when I realized it was the chair talking. Good luck in the contest. Linda (glad to have you back, by the way)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Haha thank you Linda...I think chairs around the country are thanking me, or at least have new appreciation for the derrieres that grace them! Haha Loved your review so much and appreciate the welcome back too...X
Cheers Phillippa
xoxo
Comment from boberto
Well, I must admit the picture drew me in---I'm just a dirty old man with naught but memories.
However, after reading, I find this one-sided love affair a clever, original idea.
I haven't seen any sense of humor in the committee--and, would never admit they would like to trade places with the bench.
boberto
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Well, I must admit the picture drew me in---I'm just a dirty old man with naught but memories.
However, after reading, I find this one-sided love affair a clever, original idea.
I haven't seen any sense of humor in the committee--and, would never admit they would like to trade places with the bench.
boberto
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2012
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Why thankyou boberto and the pic was possibly a bit naughty but I needed to send my reader down that path for value at the end with the big "chair" reveal. I loved your review and comments and yes, I just wonder how many of the committee will now look at the humble chair so much differently. Haha
Terrific review and thanks for the sixer.
Cheers Phillippa
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Great hearing from ya. I'm not on FS much these days--but couldn't pass up that one.
boberto
Comment from dmt1967
I like this poem very saucy lol naughty but not smutty is what I like well life's too short really to take it that seriously well its not really but we all need to lighten up a bit lol good luck in the contest and thank you
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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I like this poem very saucy lol naughty but not smutty is what I like well life's too short really to take it that seriously well its not really but we all need to lighten up a bit lol good luck in the contest and thank you
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Haha...thanks so much, I appreciate your terrific review.
Cheers closet
Comment from gazzagodbod
now young lady if you sit there like that you will catch your death of cold omg i sound like my grandma lol great poem you steamed my glasses lol xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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now young lady if you sit there like that you will catch your death of cold omg i sound like my grandma lol great poem you steamed my glasses lol xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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My my, steamed up them there glasses huh? LOL Glad you enjoyed Gazza and thanks for the super sixer review. Now I simply must go get a hanky before I get that cold! Haha I wish! Cheers Closet
