Rain
Into the storm60 total reviews
Comment from Alaskastory
'Rain' is a highly imaginative piece filled with colorful words. I have not seen the film, but the thoughts of Powder and the girl are clearly expressed and the wholeness of the story comes through. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
  |
'Rain' is a highly imaginative piece filled with colorful words. I have not seen the film, but the thoughts of Powder and the girl are clearly expressed and the wholeness of the story comes through. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
-
Hi there! If you can, see the show? You will enjoy it. Tho a bit old, it's a good one. Thank you a million for this kind and most welcome note Alaska! :) Susan
Comment from jrowland
I am not a big fanasty story reader, but enjoyed your short story.
I assume the characters are somewhere in outer space in a far off realm???
Good story.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
 |
I am not a big fanasty story reader, but enjoyed your short story.
I assume the characters are somewhere in outer space in a far off realm???
Good story.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
-
hi there~ and thank you so much. This is a sort of continuation of the movie Powder starring Mary Steenburgen? And Jeff Goldblum. SO good. Hope you will see it? I'm very happy you enjoyed this! Susan
Comment from PearlW
I always wondered about Powder's fate too. I like where he ended up in your story. You manage to convey so much emotion and beautiful imagery in such a short space that I feel compelled to give you six stars.
Pearl
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
|
I always wondered about Powder's fate too. I like where he ended up in your story. You manage to convey so much emotion and beautiful imagery in such a short space that I feel compelled to give you six stars.
Pearl
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
-
Hi Pearl! Thank you very much. I have always wondered and this came from that...I'm so glad you liked this and the extra star is nice too! Hugs, Susan
Comment from LJ-HBIC
I truly loved reading this! It's amazing how words, when written well, can take us to the place of the characters. I felt "light" while reading this story. I could feel Powder's peacefulness. And I could feel the happiness the woman felt in the rain when she was hearing him speak to her. Really great!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
|
I truly loved reading this! It's amazing how words, when written well, can take us to the place of the characters. I felt "light" while reading this story. I could feel Powder's peacefulness. And I could feel the happiness the woman felt in the rain when she was hearing him speak to her. Really great!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
-
Wow! Thank you so much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this so! This sort of enthusiasm is what makes writing fun! I send you a smile and a hug. Susan
Comment from humpwhistle
Hey, Suse. Nice job. You have a talent for turning
phrases. I have not seen this film, but based on the trailers, I have some idea who Powder is.
I have a feeling you want to be up here among the clouds with him.
Best of luck in the voting.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
|
Hey, Suse. Nice job. You have a talent for turning
phrases. I have not seen this film, but based on the trailers, I have some idea who Powder is.
I have a feeling you want to be up here among the clouds with him.
Best of luck in the voting.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2012
-
Hi there! Thanks Lee...I'm happy if you liked this...and i hope you'll see the movie someday. It's neat. I do want to be somewhere else. But the fear of the unknown keeps me in this misery. It's my own fault. Thanks again Lee. I always appreciate your time for me. Susan
Comment from ~Vincent Phelps~
This is a wonderful story. I like how the story touches on the elements of unconditional love, "the human condition" (as I call it), one "god's" sorrow in sharing it with a mortal, and a mortal's longing for his return. I like how the story ends, with him returning to soothe her, in the form of rain. It brings a feeling of comfort to me. The story was very well written with meticulous wording and depth. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
|
This is a wonderful story. I like how the story touches on the elements of unconditional love, "the human condition" (as I call it), one "god's" sorrow in sharing it with a mortal, and a mortal's longing for his return. I like how the story ends, with him returning to soothe her, in the form of rain. It brings a feeling of comfort to me. The story was very well written with meticulous wording and depth. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
-
Hi there Vincent...Thank you very much! I'm delighted you enjoyed this and I wonder if you've seen the movie 'Powder'...it's sort of 'old', but still a good one. I really appreciate your kind words! And welcome to the site! I'll try to read for you too. Susan,
-
Yes, I have seen the movie. I didn't fully know if that was what you was making a reference to. So, is your story, like a continuation of the original? Nevertheless, I enjoyed your story very much.
-
Hi there Vincent...Thank you very much! I'm delighted you enjoyed this and I wonder if you've seen the movie 'Powder'...it's sort of 'old', but still a good one. I really appreciate your kind words! And welcome to the site! I'll try to read for you too. Susan,
-
Yes, I've always 'wondered' what Powder was, who he was...this was just a take on those thoughts. Thank you again Vincent. I really am happy you like this.. :) Susan
Comment from adewpearl
Powder watched the people below; pity - I would use a comma there
I love the poetic sound of your prose, like - swirled in a circle of mist
This is hauntingly evocative, filled with emotion. I love the way it leaves me wondering, filling in the blanks, so that my imagination becomes a co-author. Well done, Susan :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
|
Powder watched the people below; pity - I would use a comma there
I love the poetic sound of your prose, like - swirled in a circle of mist
This is hauntingly evocative, filled with emotion. I love the way it leaves me wondering, filling in the blanks, so that my imagination becomes a co-author. Well done, Susan :-) Brooke
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
-
Hi Brooke! I hear you have to be gone a bit...and I will say a prayer that all is well? I also thank you for this wonderful review. I always take a lot of stock in what you say. May the force be with you my friend. xoxo. Susan
Comment from seaglass
Has a mystical feel, This held my interest and initiated thinking. It pulls all together at the end. I like it... A nice poem
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
|
Has a mystical feel, This held my interest and initiated thinking. It pulls all together at the end. I like it... A nice poem
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
-
Oh Dear Friends! Please forgive me? I must paste, copy? I'm so far behind. I did read ALL these fine reviews and appreciate them more than words can say. HUGS and a thousand thank you's!! xoxo. Susan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your story is fascinating, fanciful, and well-written. Powder is a very memorable entity not bound by the physical boundaries of humans and, therefore, awe-inspiring.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
|
Your story is fascinating, fanciful, and well-written. Powder is a very memorable entity not bound by the physical boundaries of humans and, therefore, awe-inspiring.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
-
Oh Dear Friends! Please forgive me? I must paste, copy? I'm so far behind. I did read ALL these fine reviews and appreciate them more than words can say. HUGS and a thousand thank you's!! xoxo. Susan
Comment from whispering fox
i loved your flow in regards to your supernatural contents.it was also quite excellent in how you described your story with great formulated words.splendid write!it gave me a chill
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
 |
i loved your flow in regards to your supernatural contents.it was also quite excellent in how you described your story with great formulated words.splendid write!it gave me a chill
Comment Written 31-May-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2012
-
Hi Foxy! I do thank you for reading, and also hope you'll let me know how to make this better? :) Susan
-
susan i meant to give you 5 stars because it was excellent i'm so sorry,i messed up
-
Oh okay! That's nice and a relief too. You are able to change it if you like. I do understand...I have done this too! HUGS! Susan
