Dream Searcher
A child learning in her sleep28 total reviews
Comment from Maguy Daoud
You make my heart and my soul beat, I like the inspiration that you put in this poem, all children have the curiosity to know things more and more, badly or good.
But they will learn some day to be in some boundaries for their goods.
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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You make my heart and my soul beat, I like the inspiration that you put in this poem, all children have the curiosity to know things more and more, badly or good.
But they will learn some day to be in some boundaries for their goods.
Comment Written 31-May-2013
reply by the author on 31-May-2013
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WOW, you went way back to dig this one up. If I remember right it was the first one I wrote for my Great grandchildren. Thank you for the review and your interest in my poetry! Nancy
Comment from venika
Wow! such a cute poem. I loved the picture too!It goes very well with the title and the poem. It is suitable for every child before going to bed. What an imagination! Since,I am a child, I can read between the lines. Its very comforting.
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Wow! such a cute poem. I loved the picture too!It goes very well with the title and the poem. It is suitable for every child before going to bed. What an imagination! Since,I am a child, I can read between the lines. Its very comforting.
Comment Written 30-May-2012
reply by the author on 30-May-2012
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Well, thank you venika. I really value your opinion sence you are a child! Honeycomb! Thank you so much for the six!
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Well, thank you venika. I really value your opinion since you are a child! Honeycomb! Thank you so much for the six!
Comment from Jaxpoet
Loved it, what an image. This lovely little girl getting words of comfort and guidance, great. I love the rhyme and the overall presentation. It all went together perfectly. Thanks Jim
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Loved it, what an image. This lovely little girl getting words of comfort and guidance, great. I love the rhyme and the overall presentation. It all went together perfectly. Thanks Jim
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 06-May-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. It still has a certificate? I thought it was done! I learn something new every day. Nancy
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Beautifully written and reads well a very good piece of work that gives the art work meaning bring it to life well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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Beautifully written and reads well a very good piece of work that gives the art work meaning bring it to life well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 28-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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Thank you very much for the Review. Honeycomb
Comment from J. P. Egry
This is a lovely poem to be spoken to every little girl before she goes off to dreamland. It paints beautiful word pictures with vivid nouns and verbs imbuing calm and peace. The meter and rhyme are gentle and flowing, adding to the feel of the poem. Seems like this piece would be perfect as lyrics to a lullaby.
The chosen artwork is perfect for the poem---whichever one came first, it works.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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This is a lovely poem to be spoken to every little girl before she goes off to dreamland. It paints beautiful word pictures with vivid nouns and verbs imbuing calm and peace. The meter and rhyme are gentle and flowing, adding to the feel of the poem. Seems like this piece would be perfect as lyrics to a lullaby.
The chosen artwork is perfect for the poem---whichever one came first, it works.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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Actually this little girl looks just like my Great Granddaughter Monique. I am writing a series of six poems for her. This was the first. I have written four. Thank you very much for the review. Honeycomb
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She is quite beautiful--how lucky you are!
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She is indeed. And very sweet. Thank you Nancy
Comment from ScarletClearwater
I think this was a beautiful piece. You paint a lovely picture in homage to the one you chose for display. Great job with this vivid and sleepy write.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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I think this was a beautiful piece. You paint a lovely picture in homage to the one you chose for display. Great job with this vivid and sleepy write.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2012
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Aw! So sweet! Thanks for the review! Honeycomb
Comment from adewpearl
You're right - it is a great picture.
Come here, darling - add comma for direct address
strong use of rhyming couplets
lovely and inviting descriptive detail
nice alliteration in buzzing of a bumblebee
and in learn what life
This is a wonderfully thoughtful lullaby :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2012
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You're right - it is a great picture.
Come here, darling - add comma for direct address
strong use of rhyming couplets
lovely and inviting descriptive detail
nice alliteration in buzzing of a bumblebee
and in learn what life
This is a wonderfully thoughtful lullaby :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2012
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Thanks for the heads up Brooke. I always miss something and (thank you very much) you are the one who finds the mistakes!
I fixed it. I should leave the comma after darling too, right?
Thank you so much for the review. Nancy
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Thanks Brooke! I like these two poems. Thanks for the correction. I always miss something and you are usually the one who catches it. Thank you for the review.Nancy
Comment from cantrhymetoogood
There's no doubt, you should be (if not already) published. I would imagine a children's book of bedtime poems. The preamble should read;
"Hush baby there's no cause to weep.
An angel watches as you sleep.
So dream your dreams as you recall
the wonder of the things you saw."
That is a powerful message and a loving thing to say to a child at bedtime. Your thoughts are so purely tender.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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There's no doubt, you should be (if not already) published. I would imagine a children's book of bedtime poems. The preamble should read;
"Hush baby there's no cause to weep.
An angel watches as you sleep.
So dream your dreams as you recall
the wonder of the things you saw."
That is a powerful message and a loving thing to say to a child at bedtime. Your thoughts are so purely tender.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you dear for the kind words. I really enjoyed doing these two poems. Did I tell you the cute little girl looks just like my Great Grand daughter Monique.Thanks for the reviews and the words of encouragement. Nancy
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Thank you dear for the kind words. I really enjoyed doing these two poems. Did I tell you the cute little girl looks just like my Great Grand daughter Monique.Thanks for the reviews and the words of encouragement. Nancy
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The picture sets up the poem beautifully. It lured me to want to read, and the read was a wonderful treat! Beautifully done! ...Robert
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Nancy. I'd seen it, but not reviewed... something came between I think. This is so beautiful and very well written. So sweet this poem about Dreamland and I love the picture. Great job. Fia
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Hi Nancy. I'd seen it, but not reviewed... something came between I think. This is so beautiful and very well written. So sweet this poem about Dreamland and I love the picture. Great job. Fia
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thanks Fia. It has been well received. Front page no less! I am really happy about these two poems!Every time I think I'm done I pull another one out of somewhere!LOL Nancy
Comment from Capricorn30
I definitely like this---good work. I enjoy how nature will be waiting for her through the portal,and what she will encounter through life's journey. Great rhyming
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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I definitely like this---good work. I enjoy how nature will be waiting for her through the portal,and what she will encounter through life's journey. Great rhyming
Comment Written 26-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2012
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Thank you very much for the review. Honeycomb
