Good Friday
A Cinquain171 total reviews
Comment from amahra
Very beautiful poem and remembrance of our Lord and what He did for mankind. I love the photo art also and thought it was very appropriate.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Very beautiful poem and remembrance of our Lord and what He did for mankind. I love the photo art also and thought it was very appropriate.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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amahra, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review. :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
It was so nice coming across your message of Hope and Faith on this Good Friday. How often in our busy modern world do we now forget the sorrow and the sacrifice of Jesus. This poem is well worthy of a six. The second for you today that I cannot give because I am blocked from doing so. Have a Blessed Easter. Rose.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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It was so nice coming across your message of Hope and Faith on this Good Friday. How often in our busy modern world do we now forget the sorrow and the sacrifice of Jesus. This poem is well worthy of a six. The second for you today that I cannot give because I am blocked from doing so. Have a Blessed Easter. Rose.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Rose, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments and gracious wish for an exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from MAMONIA
A good reminder to all with this fabulous
message about Good Friday. I love the
picture and the words of your cinquain
and know that it has a lot of depth and
meaning for me and for many.
How wonderfully talented you are and
I for one am so happy that you are
using the gifts God gave you.
Good Friday to you also.
Regards, Marie
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A good reminder to all with this fabulous
message about Good Friday. I love the
picture and the words of your cinquain
and know that it has a lot of depth and
meaning for me and for many.
How wonderfully talented you are and
I for one am so happy that you are
using the gifts God gave you.
Good Friday to you also.
Regards, Marie
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Marie, you have totally made my day by saying that. Thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from asheagold
This is avery truthful and profound piece. It provokes the emotions as the reader considers the death and resurrection of Christ. Great word selection and formation here.Good job!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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This is avery truthful and profound piece. It provokes the emotions as the reader considers the death and resurrection of Christ. Great word selection and formation here.Good job!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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asheagold, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from june bug
Wow! This is so true and well written. The Cinquain is a tough poem to write and you did a fantastic job! We are called to bear witness, really speaks to me. Awesome work on this beautiful poem. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Wow! This is so true and well written. The Cinquain is a tough poem to write and you did a fantastic job! We are called to bear witness, really speaks to me. Awesome work on this beautiful poem. All the best to you.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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june bug, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome. Best regards.
Comment from shy1250
Perfection in so few words: I can write 15 stanzas and not say as much as you can say in 15 worlds! Hoping 2 get better--not 2 optomistic right now--feel 2 tired 4 life. This too shall pass.. later and God bless, shy
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Perfection in so few words: I can write 15 stanzas and not say as much as you can say in 15 worlds! Hoping 2 get better--not 2 optomistic right now--feel 2 tired 4 life. This too shall pass.. later and God bless, shy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Shy, thank you so very much for your most thoughtful review - I am a regular chatterbox in real life so I like being able to express myself in fewer words in poetry :-) Brooke
Comment from Carole Rosa
Brooke, Bless you on Good Friday and bless your message in your poem. I respect you for your talent. I noticed that you have 800 + fans. It's apparent that many respect your talent! May you have a Happy Easter. Carole
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Brooke, Bless you on Good Friday and bless your message in your poem. I respect you for your talent. I noticed that you have 800 + fans. It's apparent that many respect your talent! May you have a Happy Easter. Carole
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Carole, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review, and I hope you also have a happy Easter. Every time I think about all those fans it makes me smile :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Before the foundations
of the world
it was decided
Jesus would be the One
to be rejected by His own
though He did nothing wrong
The One to bear the shame
and the pain of the cross
The One to utterly defeat death
on the Third Day and He lives
Forevermore
Very well done, Buck
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Before the foundations
of the world
it was decided
Jesus would be the One
to be rejected by His own
though He did nothing wrong
The One to bear the shame
and the pain of the cross
The One to utterly defeat death
on the Third Day and He lives
Forevermore
Very well done, Buck
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Buck, thank you so very much for your thoughtful, poetic response to my poem. I truly appreciate it. Brooke :-)
Comment from Chris Davis
This form of poetry seems to mean it is especially important to make word choices count for everything that they're worth. You did an awesome job with that, as always... thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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This form of poetry seems to mean it is especially important to make word choices count for everything that they're worth. You did an awesome job with that, as always... thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Chris, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke...
Comment from words
What a simple and thoughtful Good Friday verse, Brooke.
Love these lines:
we're called to bear witness that first
came death.
You really caused me to stop and thin here. In the life of Christ, like the life of our soul ... death often in the door ...death to ego ... anger ... greed.
Wonderful. Hugs, d
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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What a simple and thoughtful Good Friday verse, Brooke.
Love these lines:
we're called to bear witness that first
came death.
You really caused me to stop and thin here. In the life of Christ, like the life of our soul ... death often in the door ...death to ego ... anger ... greed.
Wonderful. Hugs, d
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much, Diane - I hope you are having a lovely and blessed Easter weekend. Brooke :-)
