Good Friday
A Cinquain171 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is so timely and well written. The cinquain style fits your words perfectly.Very deep thought presented here. The empty cross(before resurrection) is so appropriate. Excellent!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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This is so timely and well written. The cinquain style fits your words perfectly.Very deep thought presented here. The empty cross(before resurrection) is so appropriate. Excellent!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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RYME4U - thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from stephybs
A very short, yet very meaningful cinquain. And yes this is very true we're called to bare witness that first came death. How very cleverly thought up. The art work stands proud with this piece Brooke. Stephanie:)
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A very short, yet very meaningful cinquain. And yes this is very true we're called to bare witness that first came death. How very cleverly thought up. The art work stands proud with this piece Brooke. Stephanie:)
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Stephanie, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from barkingdog
Great seasonal commentary, Brooke.
You've summarized an historic event beautifully. I was thinking about this yesterday and came up with nothing.
What two contrasting words to rhyme--breath and death--thus making them stand out.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Great seasonal commentary, Brooke.
You've summarized an historic event beautifully. I was thinking about this yesterday and came up with nothing.
What two contrasting words to rhyme--breath and death--thus making them stand out.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Ellen, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review - yes, I've also been thinking for days about a Good Friday theme. Brooke :-)
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You're welcome:)e
Comment from peggles
There is so much fine poetry conveying the Easter message and stories about the resurrection this one is so good
your wording is perfect and matches your fine words
The artwork you have chosen is beautiful
I enjoyed this very much
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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There is so much fine poetry conveying the Easter message and stories about the resurrection this one is so good
your wording is perfect and matches your fine words
The artwork you have chosen is beautiful
I enjoyed this very much
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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peggles, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Very appropriate for the coming holidays of Easter and Passover I thought this was creative very insightful and apropos to the moment that we live in an right now. New York poet
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Very appropriate for the coming holidays of Easter and Passover I thought this was creative very insightful and apropos to the moment that we live in an right now. New York poet
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Alexander, thanks so much for your thoughtful response to this cinquain. Brooke :-)
Comment from Janet Foor
A thoughtful poem for Good Friday. The Cinquain poem is a challenge with syllable count and lines. A poetic discipline that you have mastered in this poem. Thank you for my Good Friday meditation.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A thoughtful poem for Good Friday. The Cinquain poem is a challenge with syllable count and lines. A poetic discipline that you have mastered in this poem. Thank you for my Good Friday meditation.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Jmf - thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this cinquain :-) Brooke
Comment from Crackerberries
What a poignant cinquain. Very festive for Good Friday. A definite downward turn in mood in the final line. It is such a hard holiday...so grateful for what He did for us, but so sad of how He had to go through it. Thank you for sharing your creativity.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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What a poignant cinquain. Very festive for Good Friday. A definite downward turn in mood in the final line. It is such a hard holiday...so grateful for what He did for us, but so sad of how He had to go through it. Thank you for sharing your creativity.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Crackerberries, for your positive review. Brooke
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I so enjoyed it, but so sad too.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Thank you Brooke, Adelaide, and JimLeeOriginals for this beautiful work fitting the constraints of Cinquain in poignant way to remember the death and resurrection of Jesus
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you Brooke, Adelaide, and JimLeeOriginals for this beautiful work fitting the constraints of Cinquain in poignant way to remember the death and resurrection of Jesus
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Alan, thank you so very much for your most gracious and encouraging comments and for your generous exceptional rating : -) Brooke
Comment from Dustybones
Good Cinquain, cool word a great name for a handle. Good Cinquain too with the final line a downer, buy for Mankind it is a real uplift to the top floor.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Good Cinquain, cool word a great name for a handle. Good Cinquain too with the final line a downer, buy for Mankind it is a real uplift to the top floor.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Dusty, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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Welcome. Endless love
Comment from JennieClare
Thank you so much Brooke for this Good Friday Message - yes we have to acknowledge the death of Jesus before we can acknowledge His glorious resurrection. Jenniex
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Thank you so much Brooke for this Good Friday Message - yes we have to acknowledge the death of Jesus before we can acknowledge His glorious resurrection. Jenniex
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Jennie, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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my pleasure. Jennie
