Good Friday
A Cinquain171 total reviews
Comment from squid152
Thank you for the education. I have learned so much from you in only my first two weeks on this site. Today is the first day we bear witness. Have an inspirational Good Friday-Squid
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the education. I have learned so much from you in only my first two weeks on this site. Today is the first day we bear witness. Have an inspirational Good Friday-Squid
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you so very much, Squid : -) Brooke
Comment from October21
a nice reminder of the story of Easter, especially on Good friday, to help us truly understand the concept of Jesus' birth and the impact it had on the earth for many years to follow.
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a nice reminder of the story of Easter, especially on Good friday, to help us truly understand the concept of Jesus' birth and the impact it had on the earth for many years to follow.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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October, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, great job on this cinquain and what a wonderful
and timely message for this Easter weekend. Christ
died that we might have eternal life.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Brooke, great job on this cinquain and what a wonderful
and timely message for this Easter weekend. Christ
died that we might have eternal life.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Judy, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Mara del Mar
Hi Brooke:
This poem have images very vivid, is a message vigorous
that have a firm conviction your words. Naturally, first,
have that come the death, after, the resurrection.
Congratulations.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hi Brooke:
This poem have images very vivid, is a message vigorous
that have a firm conviction your words. Naturally, first,
have that come the death, after, the resurrection.
Congratulations.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Mara, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Starlit Ink
This was very simple but beautiful and very thought-provoking. The picture and words are plain but they say a lot. I'm not sure if that was your intention but it worked.
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This was very simple but beautiful and very thought-provoking. The picture and words are plain but they say a lot. I'm not sure if that was your intention but it worked.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Starlit Ink, thank you so very much for your gracious comments and generous exceptional rating. I truly appreciate it :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
I am still limited to 5 but pretend this is a well deserved 6. this is a beautiful cinquain for this blessed holiday. I have been listening to the bells chiming all day from the cathedral down the street. They add so much emotion to your poem as I read it.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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I am still limited to 5 but pretend this is a well deserved 6. this is a beautiful cinquain for this blessed holiday. I have been listening to the bells chiming all day from the cathedral down the street. They add so much emotion to your poem as I read it.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Valerie, thank you - I am sitting here smiling and pretending :-) Brooke
Comment from HuntersMoon
Still limited to 5 :( but this is deserving of 6 plus. A great summation of the holy day that approaches and the true meaning.
Well done (as usual LOL).
Ken
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Still limited to 5 :( but this is deserving of 6 plus. A great summation of the holy day that approaches and the true meaning.
Well done (as usual LOL).
Ken
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Ken, thank you so much for your gracious wish for an exceptional rating. Brooke :-)
Comment from WilliamDeen
Your cinquain poem, Good Friday, is exceptional. It creates so many emotions in me; gratitude for salvation, sadness for Jesus, guilt for my sins and other's sins.
You are a master at poetry and truly understand people's emotions.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Your cinquain poem, Good Friday, is exceptional. It creates so many emotions in me; gratitude for salvation, sadness for Jesus, guilt for my sins and other's sins.
You are a master at poetry and truly understand people's emotions.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Billy, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from rama devi
Powerful reflective cinquain with an excellent impact on your turning line in the close. A timely theme. Good presentation. Insightful reminder. Happy Easter to you. Love, rd
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Powerful reflective cinquain with an excellent impact on your turning line in the close. A timely theme. Good presentation. Insightful reminder. Happy Easter to you. Love, rd
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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rama devi, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review. Easter isn't your holiday, but I wish you a good weekend! :-) Brooke
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To me, every single day is a 'holy' 'day', including Easter. I love Christ too...even though I grew up Jewish. i just do not think of Him as "the only way". Love, rd
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Then we're quite alike because I don't think of Him as the only way either, much to the chagrin of some fellow Christians :-)
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:-)) Good to hear that!
Comment from Deejharrington
A perfect Cinquain to express Good Friday and what it really means. You used the style and content to express your faith and the historical events that occurred on this day.
deb
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A perfect Cinquain to express Good Friday and what it really means. You used the style and content to express your faith and the historical events that occurred on this day.
deb
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Deb, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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my pleasure
deb
