Day Closes Up Her Shop
quatrains in 8/7/8/7209 total reviews
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Brooke ...
What a beautiful sunset picture you have at the top of this short work in which you develop the thought that Day closes up her shop each night, to reopen again in the moirning. Of course, imagination is conjuring up visions of all the stock on hand each day.
I enjoyed this and thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Hullo Brooke ...
What a beautiful sunset picture you have at the top of this short work in which you develop the thought that Day closes up her shop each night, to reopen again in the moirning. Of course, imagination is conjuring up visions of all the stock on hand each day.
I enjoyed this and thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Nanette Mary, thanks so very much, my friend, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
a beautiful piece yet again. and multi-interpretation. you have nicely personified the sun's movements comparing them to a shop.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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a beautiful piece yet again. and multi-interpretation. you have nicely personified the sun's movements comparing them to a shop.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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rebekka, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Amy Comstock
Another beautifully crafted poem...so clever! This is such a great way to look at this...the job of the sun! Thanks Brooke..this made me smile!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Another beautifully crafted poem...so clever! This is such a great way to look at this...the job of the sun! Thanks Brooke..this made me smile!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
Amy, thanks so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Matoshka
I just loved how this felt to my spirit, the sun cannot be shelved in those glorious colors, he bursts into beauty poet's write about. Just beautiful my friend.
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I just loved how this felt to my spirit, the sun cannot be shelved in those glorious colors, he bursts into beauty poet's write about. Just beautiful my friend.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Matoshka, I truly appreciate your graciously generous exceptional rating and your encouraging comments :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke, I loved it. Blessings
Comment from Anisa-
Still blocked from giving you a six! >:(
Wow, yet again, you've managed to give me goosebumps. This is truly a beautiful poem.
"Day ... each night." - Where do you come up with lines like this? You breath so much life into things it's crazy.
I especially loved the last two lines. It really brought the whole thing together. Great job.
Anisa
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Still blocked from giving you a six! >:(
Wow, yet again, you've managed to give me goosebumps. This is truly a beautiful poem.
"Day ... each night." - Where do you come up with lines like this? You breath so much life into things it's crazy.
I especially loved the last two lines. It really brought the whole thing together. Great job.
Anisa
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Anisa, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from patsypats
What a uniquely written piece. The details are defining and capture great imagery. The rhyming scheme has added character to your words and the picture choice is fitting and accents your work well. The flow is smooth and easy to follow, I found no error:)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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What a uniquely written piece. The details are defining and capture great imagery. The rhyming scheme has added character to your words and the picture choice is fitting and accents your work well. The flow is smooth and easy to follow, I found no error:)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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I appreciate your gracious response to this poem, Patsy : -) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Most unusual and not that poetic way to think about sunset. But your beautiful Quatrains make it work in this poem. Liked it with shelves from shop and closing at night and opening each morning. Nice metaphor if you ponder longer.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Most unusual and not that poetic way to think about sunset. But your beautiful Quatrains make it work in this poem. Liked it with shelves from shop and closing at night and opening each morning. Nice metaphor if you ponder longer.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Ine, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from jaded831
I enjoyed reading your poem. If we have a bad day, night time is welcomed, for we always have hope for a better tomorrow. The picture is breathtaking.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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I enjoyed reading your poem. If we have a bad day, night time is welcomed, for we always have hope for a better tomorrow. The picture is breathtaking.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Jaded, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from God's Writer
I think this is one of the best poems you have ever written. I have read many of them and find your wording, coloration and scheme to be in sink. Thank you for the great poem.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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I think this is one of the best poems you have ever written. I have read many of them and find your wording, coloration and scheme to be in sink. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Erick, thank you so very much for your lovely, encouraging comments. I'm thrilled you like this poem so much. Thank you also for your generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
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I feel it to be an exceptionally well written poem.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I love the thought of the sun signing a promissory note with the sunset, saying he'll be back tomorrow. Such a creative idea. Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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I love the thought of the sun signing a promissory note with the sunset, saying he'll be back tomorrow. Such a creative idea. Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Jeanie, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
