Mummy Mouse Has a Day Out.
Description in the title.19 total reviews
Comment from pattipac
Enjoyed how mummy mouse was able to have some much needed rest and relaxation. She had gotten her two little ones off to school, kissed her hubby goodbye,made supper and cleaned house. Phew! Who wouldn't enjoy a few hours at the beach.Good word choice and rhyme scheme made your story poem flow.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Enjoyed how mummy mouse was able to have some much needed rest and relaxation. She had gotten her two little ones off to school, kissed her hubby goodbye,made supper and cleaned house. Phew! Who wouldn't enjoy a few hours at the beach.Good word choice and rhyme scheme made your story poem flow.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you, pattipac! I was so pleasantly surprised to see Mummy Mouse, again. It is a bit weird though, I did a book reading in an infants school today and read this one as well as a few other to them, and then to find you had read it was quite something! Thank you so much for the lovely review, I am really pleased you enjoyed it. xx Sandra
Comment from alexisleech
I can't believe how much I enjoyed that. Of course, I wasn't thinking mouse, I was thinking me! You have managed to create a secret, magical day out for a busy mum who seriously deserves a bit of R&R. I had to laugh at the guilt trip she had which resulted in her promising to bring the children at the weekend.
Another perfectly penned story, written in excellent rhyme. Alexis x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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I can't believe how much I enjoyed that. Of course, I wasn't thinking mouse, I was thinking me! You have managed to create a secret, magical day out for a busy mum who seriously deserves a bit of R&R. I had to laugh at the guilt trip she had which resulted in her promising to bring the children at the weekend.
Another perfectly penned story, written in excellent rhyme. Alexis x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much Alexis, I am so very pleased you enjoyed it! I think all mums should have a 'mum day.' Thank you again! xsx
Comment from eberry4
OOOhh! Every mummy needs a day out but we always feel sooo guilty but if we share what we found to be fun then it's okay, right? Ha! Thouroughly enjoyed your lighthearted poem. Made me smile.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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OOOhh! Every mummy needs a day out but we always feel sooo guilty but if we share what we found to be fun then it's okay, right? Ha! Thouroughly enjoyed your lighthearted poem. Made me smile.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Thank you, eberry4, I agree, share and enjoy, but still have that little time for yourself! Thank you for the lovely review.xsxWha
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your welcome
Comment from adewpearl
excellent rhyming couplets
and good steady cadence when read aloud
I love that the mother of the family is taking some "me" time to pamper herself
vivid descriptive detail
good alliteration in Mummy had made
I love how this mother finds a way to share her good time with her family while still having her private time :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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excellent rhyming couplets
and good steady cadence when read aloud
I love that the mother of the family is taking some "me" time to pamper herself
vivid descriptive detail
good alliteration in Mummy had made
I love how this mother finds a way to share her good time with her family while still having her private time :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Brooke. We Mums have to have time out from time to time! Thank you.xsx
Comment from jmdg1954
Sandra,
This was perfect and kept my attention from first to last word. The storyline is fantastic and true to life. Mummy Mouse sat(,) upon the hot sand may be the only correction I see (trust me I am no genious when it comes to corrections).
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Sandra,
This was perfect and kept my attention from first to last word. The storyline is fantastic and true to life. Mummy Mouse sat(,) upon the hot sand may be the only correction I see (trust me I am no genious when it comes to corrections).
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, John. No, you are right, must go in and remove that. I seem to have had a love affair with the comma and the full stop lately!! Thank you for reviewing this, and for enjoying it. xsx
Comment from AlexAX
This was fun to read. Rhymed well and had a steady flow to it that would keep a child's interest and make it fun to read to them. You could ask questions about it afterwards about what they think their mums do when they are at school etc; You can really get their imagination going with a book like this. Alex :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This was fun to read. Rhymed well and had a steady flow to it that would keep a child's interest and make it fun to read to them. You could ask questions about it afterwards about what they think their mums do when they are at school etc; You can really get their imagination going with a book like this. Alex :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Alex, I never thought of that! It would make a good book, writing the idea's they would come up with! I can imagine they would be far, far out with their responses! I am pleased you enjoyed this one. Thank you. xsx
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I'm sure they would come up with some very interesting responses too hahaha If i am in the room with the older children 3-5 years. I always ask what they think of the book we have just read, what they would do etc. They are so imaginative :)
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, this was so much fun to read. Your words penned with verses that flow very easily.
Great choice with the artwork.
You have such a great talent for composing very well written stories and poetry,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Sandra, this was so much fun to read. Your words penned with verses that flow very easily.
Great choice with the artwork.
You have such a great talent for composing very well written stories and poetry,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Oh, Jim, thank you! You always say such nice things. I appreciate them a lot, comming from one whom as a poet, I admire so much. Thank you.xsx
Comment from l.raven
This is so sweet. I love the wording and the picture is perfect. Your rhytm and rhymes are great and children would love this poem. I so glad mummy mouse was able to get out for awhlie and enjoy the beach. How great this poem is. Linda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This is so sweet. I love the wording and the picture is perfect. Your rhytm and rhymes are great and children would love this poem. I so glad mummy mouse was able to get out for awhlie and enjoy the beach. How great this poem is. Linda
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Linda, that is so nice of you, thank you for a lovely review! xsx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Aww, I think Mummy is a very smart mouse! Getting away and having some time for herself, thinking ahead to take her family there, and then enjoying the life she has at home! Good story for the moms who might be reading it to their little ones. The little ones will enjoy it, hearing about the water and splashing, the sand and shells.
I love reading your stories. I don't think anyone read stories to me when I was little, so I seem to enjoy reading them to myself now. I hope that doesn't sound goofy, but there you have it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Aww, I think Mummy is a very smart mouse! Getting away and having some time for herself, thinking ahead to take her family there, and then enjoying the life she has at home! Good story for the moms who might be reading it to their little ones. The little ones will enjoy it, hearing about the water and splashing, the sand and shells.
I love reading your stories. I don't think anyone read stories to me when I was little, so I seem to enjoy reading them to myself now. I hope that doesn't sound goofy, but there you have it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Dear Sue, how could I possible think you are 'goofy'? Why do you think I write them! I have an 85 year old male fan, (my Uncle!!) and bless him, he didn't have them as a child either. Your reviews mean so much to me, I really mean than. Thank you so much! xsx
Comment from Gungalo
How lovely this is and it's about a Mummy Mouse. The kids will love this and be dying to hear more. It's written for kids and written wonderfully.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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How lovely this is and it's about a Mummy Mouse. The kids will love this and be dying to hear more. It's written for kids and written wonderfully.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Gungalo! Thank you for such lovely words. xsx
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