As Berries Burst With Juice
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Comment from Alan K Pease
Rooke. You gave me something very charming about your nature in the name your teacher gave you, Your poem is a sensible and intriguing view about the treats that surround us in nature done in iambic meter.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Rooke. You gave me something very charming about your nature in the name your teacher gave you, Your poem is a sensible and intriguing view about the treats that surround us in nature done in iambic meter.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Alan, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
this is an outstanding piece of poetic art! the fresh flavor of a ripe strawberry is equivalent with a mudcake, although it has the calories and freshness of fruit salad.
i'm like pavlov's dog, the image brings the saliva.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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this is an outstanding piece of poetic art! the fresh flavor of a ripe strawberry is equivalent with a mudcake, although it has the calories and freshness of fruit salad.
i'm like pavlov's dog, the image brings the saliva.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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rjuselius, thank you so very much for your thoughtful comments and for your wonderfully generous rating. I truly appreciate it :-) Brooke
Comment from Allison78
I really enjoyed reading your poem! I can just taste berries and love how they remind me of my Grandma. Beautifully written, great job!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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I really enjoyed reading your poem! I can just taste berries and love how they remind me of my Grandma. Beautifully written, great job!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Allison, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so nice, Brooke, I love going blackberry picking, its something I miss here in Spain, too hot and not enough rain in my part. I guess you have guessed by now, I am not the cleverest of reviewers, I have no idea of the rights and wrongs of poetry, I just know what I really like. And I really like this. I love the picture too. xsx
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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That is so nice, Brooke, I love going blackberry picking, its something I miss here in Spain, too hot and not enough rain in my part. I guess you have guessed by now, I am not the cleverest of reviewers, I have no idea of the rights and wrongs of poetry, I just know what I really like. And I really like this. I love the picture too. xsx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Sandra, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
Everything Brooke burbles is both wise and enchanting, and this is no exception. This is a very empowering piece, focusing on the person rather than the divine, and our place in the natural chaos around us. I loved it :-).
Mike
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Everything Brooke burbles is both wise and enchanting, and this is no exception. This is a very empowering piece, focusing on the person rather than the divine, and our place in the natural chaos around us. I loved it :-).
Mike
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Mike, thank you so much, my thoughtful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Ankh
It is sad that most children today are stuck in a town or city. They will never know the joys of berry eating and the unique freedom that a stroll in the wild brings. Thank you for this one. I enjoyed it :-0~
Seth
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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It is sad that most children today are stuck in a town or city. They will never know the joys of berry eating and the unique freedom that a stroll in the wild brings. Thank you for this one. I enjoyed it :-0~
Seth
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Seth, thanks so much, my friend :-) Yeah, the rather rural suburb where I grew up is now a place covered by strip malls. Gone are the berries. Brooke
Comment from Maria C.
Wow! This picture is so perfect with your work. I have to say this is one of my favorites. The words just flow with the tune, nice alliteration and rhyme, and gorgeous overall presentation. I can't wait for blackberry season!
Isn't it wonderful where inpiration can come from.
Blessings,
maria c.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Wow! This picture is so perfect with your work. I have to say this is one of my favorites. The words just flow with the tune, nice alliteration and rhyme, and gorgeous overall presentation. I can't wait for blackberry season!
Isn't it wonderful where inpiration can come from.
Blessings,
maria c.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Maria, thank you so very much for this wonderfully generous exceptional rating and for your lovely comments :-) Brooke
Comment from amada
Brooke, poetry has your name and number! Beautiful hymn to inspire such a fruitful poem. I could see the berries bursting forth at the sound of the music!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Brooke, poetry has your name and number! Beautiful hymn to inspire such a fruitful poem. I could see the berries bursting forth at the sound of the music!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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amada, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Hitcher
Mmmmm! You know how to set the table Brooke, I was ready to take a seat and wait for desert, ha ha. Excellent, succulent imagery offered up here, it looks like a fun style of poetry to sink one's teeth into :)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Mmmmm! You know how to set the table Brooke, I was ready to take a seat and wait for desert, ha ha. Excellent, succulent imagery offered up here, it looks like a fun style of poetry to sink one's teeth into :)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Hitch, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from snoopy lover
Brooke....wow! This was just wonderful and at a time we all need to be reminded of the coming of spring and all it offers. Your meter and rhyme scheme worked well for me...and I agree with your tune choice. There are others too I think. Thanks for moving forward with looking at tunes! Karen
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Brooke....wow! This was just wonderful and at a time we all need to be reminded of the coming of spring and all it offers. Your meter and rhyme scheme worked well for me...and I agree with your tune choice. There are others too I think. Thanks for moving forward with looking at tunes! Karen
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2012
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Karen, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
