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Some things can really hurt. 6 Word story.
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the struggles to transition

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It seems we are sent the hardest tasks in our older age and spend much time reflecting on life. ' I think the line...Almighty will critique the taint in life' summarises the whole Crown in one succinct expression. Except for that, how could we go on? Well done and good luck... Giddy


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks, Giddy, for your five star review. Joyce
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The art work you chose for this poem is beautiful. I really liked it. This is a very well written poem with much hard work and dedication. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing,
Zari


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much, Zari, for your exceptional review. Joyce
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A long poem/song, but well worth the reading. This is very well written. Death will have its day, but the Lord will intervene. Good luck in your contest.


 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks, Charlie, for your encouraging and excellent review. Joyce
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A crown of heroic sonnets. Indeed. Very well done. You have such beautiful words to express emotions. Very wonderful work my friend. My best regards to you .




 Comment Written 21-Feb-2012



reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks, Amada. Quite a challenge and appreciate your reading. Joyce
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No other way!
You deserve six here, so much of poetic skill and effort is required to write even one sonnet and you did it so many times.
The rhyming is excellent.
Beautiful work! All the best!


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    Thanks so much again, rashi. J
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good job. thank you for sharing this piece of work with me. it is thoroughly appreciated. keep up the amazing work you are doing and may your light shine bright in His time. Blessings unto you and your house.
Forever and Truly,
Kenzi


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks for your kind words, Kenzi, and excellent rating. Joyce
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Hi Joyce,

You have penned a marvelous crown of heroic sonnets. I worked hard to learn how to write in iambics and yours are flawless. You have a musical rhyme and the theme is stunning. I doubt I will ever try a crown of sonnets as one must stayed focused and not deviate from the theme....you have accomplished both. Well done and good luck in the contest.....blessings, chey


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much, Chey. Appreciate your reading and your five star review. Congrats also to you on your recent win. :) Joyce
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Oh Joyce, this is just amazing. I have to applaud anyone who can pull one of these off, much less one that is so personal to the writer. That being said I don't think anyone on site could detail this poem as well as Rama did in her suggestions to you. There are just a couple of lines that don't scan well but in a poem of this magnitude that is nothing, but probably worth fixing so that you have perfection in writing. This was really beautiful and heart jerking. Anyone who knows your story can't help but wipe a few tears away when done reading. I applaud you for your courage. Much love and prayers your way. Jo Lynn


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    Thanks again, dot. xxxx
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A very powerful work. There was a great deal of emotion for me reading this work. Though I know next to nothing on Sonnets I do know about battling cancer, and being told its terminal with 6 to 9 months at best.

There is indeed a place we get to with the acceptance and the inner peace needed to transition from this life to the next. I have come to understand the power of love in all my days no matter how painful or low they are.

This work was beyond any stars that I could give it. There is within it a pure energy, of spirit of soul. Yet one never gives up hope, and so our days are accepted as they are, blessings to enjoy the next breath the day as it unfolds.

I wish you well, I wish you healing and above all I wish you love and peace to fill all your days.
Thank you for sharing,
Maureen


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    So appreciate your words and review, Maureen. Knowing where you are in life makes your review even more meaningful to me. Thank you so much. Joyce
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Incredible feat, dear sister. Hail to the Queen! Loved best the following (they make me want to use each as a prompt for a free verse piece--they're that thought-provoking):

to wilt one petal at a time / until the breath of life adjusts / the music in my core

and "lava slop" was a great description, too. Thank God for the therapy of writing. You bless me with your words. Love, hugs, and (somewhat backslidden) prayers for you. :)


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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
    Queen, smeeeen....LOL Thanks again, Jess, for your wonderful words, hugs and prayers..
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