The Ships of the Desert
Camels helped map the Australian Outback17 total reviews
Comment from givan
This poem is wonderful, I love the history shown. The title is great, I had to read it. Descriptions were very detailed and only needed a few words to do it in. I like how you were able to incorporate the "black men still watch from desert sand" in the first and last stanzas.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2012
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This poem is wonderful, I love the history shown. The title is great, I had to read it. Descriptions were very detailed and only needed a few words to do it in. I like how you were able to incorporate the "black men still watch from desert sand" in the first and last stanzas.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2012
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givan, I wrote that poem some time ago, so you suprised me when you reviewed; a nice suprise, thank you for reading, blessings, K.
Comment from Purple Lily
An excellent poem that teaches so much. The images that evokes are strong, particularly those of "black men watched from desert sand." I can visualize them watching with curiosity and dismay the white intruders of their "sacred land".
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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An excellent poem that teaches so much. The images that evokes are strong, particularly those of "black men watched from desert sand." I can visualize them watching with curiosity and dismay the white intruders of their "sacred land".
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thank you for reading my friend. There are no answers to this ongoing battle. Blessings, K.
Comment from percival86jack
"horses proved unsuitable in the early days, many whites died from thirst after their horses dropped dead in the dreadful heat'... wow! Interesting and a little known fact! At least I don't think too many people know of this... I enjoyed your poem! Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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"horses proved unsuitable in the early days, many whites died from thirst after their horses dropped dead in the dreadful heat'... wow! Interesting and a little known fact! At least I don't think too many people know of this... I enjoyed your poem! Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Hello Jack, Thanks for reading; lots of people don't know our early history. Glad you liked the poem. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from rightforyou
Cute
Where is the kangaroo, I didn't know that they had camels in Australia COOL...I Loved your poem and the photo chosen great job on this lovely piece...Ron
Tourists Come from far and wide
The Great Outback - Australia's pride.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Cute
Where is the kangaroo, I didn't know that they had camels in Australia COOL...I Loved your poem and the photo chosen great job on this lovely piece...Ron
Tourists Come from far and wide
The Great Outback - Australia's pride.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Thanks for reading. Kangaroo? Don't think the men could ride Kangaroos then or now! LOL. Thanks for reading Ron. cheers, Kay.
Comment from Just Alyx
Loved this in every way, and especially the end rhymes because I didn't even realise they were there until the second reading. This reads *great* aloud. Really enjoyed the change of tempo in the third verse, and that whole verse itself. The symbolisms thru invasion by foreigners, on foreign camels, was excellent. Beautifully put together piece, Kay. It says a lot about the 'advancement' of mankind, that's for sure. Well stated. Cheers. Alyx.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Loved this in every way, and especially the end rhymes because I didn't even realise they were there until the second reading. This reads *great* aloud. Really enjoyed the change of tempo in the third verse, and that whole verse itself. The symbolisms thru invasion by foreigners, on foreign camels, was excellent. Beautifully put together piece, Kay. It says a lot about the 'advancement' of mankind, that's for sure. Well stated. Cheers. Alyx.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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G'day possum, Thanks for reading. Funny part now, we are slaughtering camels in the wild and sending them to Afghanistan! My, how things change! Happy New Year mate. It's raining today (Sunday) Hooray. Avagoodweekend, Luv, Kay.
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G'day, Kay mate. Yep, I sometimes think the Aus government's mentality is about equal to that of a cane toads when it comes to our ecology. Some are just as bloody toxic as the toads, too. It's about to rain here as well. There goes the landscaping idea. Gee, I'll just have to amuse myself and ... write? Heh, Happy New Year, buddy. Alyx XX
Comment from ajeyvmore
great great great poem of you
I am student of std.8 I am 13 years old I am living in Pune,Maharashtra,India Ajey More,India
please give me good rating for my poem Cricket Kolaveri Fever
In the poem aussi-wari means Indian cricket team going to australia but India lost the match against strong team of australia and I am very happy for performance of australia team being INDIAN cricket fan
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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great great great poem of you
I am student of std.8 I am 13 years old I am living in Pune,Maharashtra,India Ajey More,India
please give me good rating for my poem Cricket Kolaveri Fever
In the poem aussi-wari means Indian cricket team going to australia but India lost the match against strong team of australia and I am very happy for performance of australia team being INDIAN cricket fan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2012
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Hello young person in India. Did you learn anything from my poem? I will look at your work. Cheers, Kace.
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Aussie, the six stars are not because I think of you as a friend. I give them to this poem because the poem is worthy of six stars. What's nice is that everyone learns something from your work. The presentation is great in construction, words are alive and rhymes aren't forced. Thank you for this interesting poem!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Aussie, the six stars are not because I think of you as a friend. I give them to this poem because the poem is worthy of six stars. What's nice is that everyone learns something from your work. The presentation is great in construction, words are alive and rhymes aren't forced. Thank you for this interesting poem!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed; try to tell stories about my country. Blessings, K.
Comment from ameen786
Aussie my friend, superb reflections upon history and present industrial environment; camel is nicknamed as the cadillac of desert; love the verse with beautiful words and lovely phrasing and excellent rhyming, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Aussie my friend, superb reflections upon history and present industrial environment; camel is nicknamed as the cadillac of desert; love the verse with beautiful words and lovely phrasing and excellent rhyming, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review, glad you enjoyed a little about our history. Blessings, K.
Comment from nancyjam
I never knew this and enjoyed
learning from your well crafted
poem.
Great images described - enjoyed
the rhyming couplets too.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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I never knew this and enjoyed
learning from your well crafted
poem.
Great images described - enjoyed
the rhyming couplets too.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Hello friend, I aim to tell stories about our country and so I am pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, K.
Comment from jlsavell
Great poem sweet Aussie!!! As always you bring us to the place you spaek with excellent imagery and thought provoking phrases that speak of history and man and his ways, good or evil.. absolutely beautiful is this work... jimi
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Great poem sweet Aussie!!! As always you bring us to the place you spaek with excellent imagery and thought provoking phrases that speak of history and man and his ways, good or evil.. absolutely beautiful is this work... jimi
Comment Written 11-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2012
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Jimi, Thank you Mrs. Texas; so pleased that you liked reading a little of our history. Bless you busy bee. Love, Kace.
