George
a prince of a horse111 total reviews
Comment from spe9im
This is a beautiful and well-written story. I felt that I knew George and hurt because he is gone. The pace of the story is just right and I could tell the love Catherine had for him. Well done, truly a great story.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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This is a beautiful and well-written story. I felt that I knew George and hurt because he is gone. The pace of the story is just right and I could tell the love Catherine had for him. Well done, truly a great story.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2015
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Thank you so very much, spe9im. I really, truly appreciate this grand review. How very kind of you to pick this from my portfolio and review for 'peanuts'!
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Mamukie
So well written! Within a few short lines, you brought us into the this world of kindness. You also taught me that God Our Father, made all creatures for our pleasure and happiness. Doesn't the love just flow out so easy when we speak about the love animals give? Man can give too. Why is he so fearful to love another person? Wish you would write more stories on how animals are capable of giving love so freely. You made me happy today. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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So well written! Within a few short lines, you brought us into the this world of kindness. You also taught me that God Our Father, made all creatures for our pleasure and happiness. Doesn't the love just flow out so easy when we speak about the love animals give? Man can give too. Why is he so fearful to love another person? Wish you would write more stories on how animals are capable of giving love so freely. You made me happy today. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2013
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Hi, Mamukie. I always try to be open to the voice of Holy Spirit in all that I do. I believe that your review is a positive nudge in a direction I've been considering lately. Thank you for 'listening' to your own inner prompt and being part of a bigger plan. Animals are one of the Creator's most precious gifts, for sure. Blessings, my friend. :0) Bev
Comment from Träumerin
A moving piece, Writingfundimension, with no jarring spelling and punctuation errors. (That's important to me because they spoil the flow of the story.)
I'd like to read the story of George's rescue and how he helped Catherine move through the dark periods of her life. There's a lot of dramatic potential there.
A couple of phrases that didn't sit well with me, maybe because they seemed too flowery, which detracts from the sincerity of the piece to my mind.
"peace flowed from his eyes"
"leave behind shed tears." - I think "the tears they had shed" would read better
"as evening came courting"
It's your writing, and if you're happy with those phrases, no matter.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2012
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A moving piece, Writingfundimension, with no jarring spelling and punctuation errors. (That's important to me because they spoil the flow of the story.)
I'd like to read the story of George's rescue and how he helped Catherine move through the dark periods of her life. There's a lot of dramatic potential there.
A couple of phrases that didn't sit well with me, maybe because they seemed too flowery, which detracts from the sincerity of the piece to my mind.
"peace flowed from his eyes"
"leave behind shed tears." - I think "the tears they had shed" would read better
"as evening came courting"
It's your writing, and if you're happy with those phrases, no matter.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2012
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Hi, Traumerin. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I sure appreciate you 'dusting' this one off for attention. I'm always learning, when it comes to writing, and so your suggestions will be considered. Much appreciate it! Bev
Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow Bev, what a moving tribute to a sweet old horse and I found especially moving the scene at the end with the companion horse. Reminds me of a movie I saw recently where a dog did a similar with his owner that had died.
You captured the size and power of this gentle horse and told the story with wonderful compassion. I agree, maybe the party WAS more for the owner. Obviously the horse meant a great deal to her and she wanted everyone to know it. Thats not a bad thing. Thanks for sharing this sad yet very well narrated expression about a horse seeing out his days, loved and treated very well by his owner. You couldnt ask for better fan mare...whoops I mean fare...than that.
Cheers Closet xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Wow Bev, what a moving tribute to a sweet old horse and I found especially moving the scene at the end with the companion horse. Reminds me of a movie I saw recently where a dog did a similar with his owner that had died.
You captured the size and power of this gentle horse and told the story with wonderful compassion. I agree, maybe the party WAS more for the owner. Obviously the horse meant a great deal to her and she wanted everyone to know it. Thats not a bad thing. Thanks for sharing this sad yet very well narrated expression about a horse seeing out his days, loved and treated very well by his owner. You couldnt ask for better fan mare...whoops I mean fare...than that.
Cheers Closet xoxo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2012
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Thank you, buddy. I admit feeling, at the time, that the whole thing was surreal. Years later, I can see the value of what my friend did for both George and the humans there. It was an extraordinary gesture that I find in retropect to have left me with an indelible memory. Though Catherine and I are no longer friends, I believe she is an exceptional person in some ways. Very much like you!! What a beautiful review you here, p. Hugs and snugs...Bevvski
Comment from billie
I was drawn in immediately by the first sentence, and indeed reading the first paragraph intrigued me, and convinced me to read on. The author has taken a sensitive topic, and approached it in a positive way. I shed a few tears as I moved through the piece. great flow and pace. simply liked it, and have no suggestions for improvement.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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I was drawn in immediately by the first sentence, and indeed reading the first paragraph intrigued me, and convinced me to read on. The author has taken a sensitive topic, and approached it in a positive way. I shed a few tears as I moved through the piece. great flow and pace. simply liked it, and have no suggestions for improvement.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you, billie. Your personal insights are much appreciated! Kind regards, Bev
Comment from rashi kumar
Moving! Your experience must be ethereal,
great!
Very well-written and beautifully told story, a real one.
The horses are really strong and powerful,dangerous at times.
But when we love them, the scenario changes.
Pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Moving! Your experience must be ethereal,
great!
Very well-written and beautifully told story, a real one.
The horses are really strong and powerful,dangerous at times.
But when we love them, the scenario changes.
Pleasure to read!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thank you very kindly, rashi kumar. Thank you for your lovely and generous review of George's story. Much appreciated! Bev
Comment from Glasstruth
Very sad. Patches missed George as much as anybody. It's a shame that "advanced rectal cancer after months of suffering through tests, x-rays and long trips to equine centers. When the tumor finally manifested itself" I know thatsa sad day. Remember when my dog died of kidney failure. Touching story! Les
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Very sad. Patches missed George as much as anybody. It's a shame that "advanced rectal cancer after months of suffering through tests, x-rays and long trips to equine centers. When the tumor finally manifested itself" I know thatsa sad day. Remember when my dog died of kidney failure. Touching story! Les
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Hello, Les. I'm so glad that you took time out of your busy schedule to read about George. I thank you for your kind and generous review. Blessings, Bev
Comment from Bellringer
Bev, Your story is exceptionally well written with tender, poetic imagery of this beloved horse's wake and passing. I particularly like the very original scene of Catherine sitting in the stall, entertaining dark thoughts. The system will not allow a six, though it is truly worthy. If you haven't already seen the movie, War Horse, I truly recommend it (bring plenty of tissues). Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Bev, Your story is exceptionally well written with tender, poetic imagery of this beloved horse's wake and passing. I particularly like the very original scene of Catherine sitting in the stall, entertaining dark thoughts. The system will not allow a six, though it is truly worthy. If you haven't already seen the movie, War Horse, I truly recommend it (bring plenty of tissues). Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Hi, Hector. I definitely plan to see War Horse. Just haven't found the time yet, but it looks like one to be seen on the big screen. Thank you so much for this beautiful, touching review, my friend. I'm honored by your words of support and your wish for another star. Truly, your support is priceless to me. Kindest regards, Bev
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You're most welcome, my friend. Blessings always, Hector
Comment from Rama Rao
I too love horses and stories about horse. I read your story with keen interest and enjoyed every word of it. Yes, they are magnificent animals and command our respect. Your piece was well scripted to make a fine read. Bravo.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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I too love horses and stories about horse. I read your story with keen interest and enjoyed every word of it. Yes, they are magnificent animals and command our respect. Your piece was well scripted to make a fine read. Bravo.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Thank you so very much for this touching and beautiful review, RR. I really appreciate the support for George's story. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from catch22
This story made me tear up, and that's saying something. I love horses, so you struck a soft spot with this write. The writing was clear and succinct, and the content of the story was touching. Horses are very beautiful and intuitive creatures.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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This story made me tear up, and that's saying something. I love horses, so you struck a soft spot with this write. The writing was clear and succinct, and the content of the story was touching. Horses are very beautiful and intuitive creatures.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
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Hello, gail. What a beautiful review. I am so appreciative of the time you took to read George's story and send along your supportive comments. Blessings, Bev
