Sunshower
Magic22 total reviews
Comment from peggles
Lovely a soft sweet story
So enjoyable
Easy to read and follow
I have been delighted to be able to view this
And it is a pleasure to review
Well done
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Lovely a soft sweet story
So enjoyable
Easy to read and follow
I have been delighted to be able to view this
And it is a pleasure to review
Well done
Comment Written 28-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi there! Thank you so much Peg. I am very glad you enjoyed this. Susan
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very lovely story and I enjoyed reading it very much Realist. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I hope you had a lovely Christmas too.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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This is a very lovely story and I enjoyed reading it very much Realist. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. I hope you had a lovely Christmas too.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi there! Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this! Happy New Year! Susan
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Hi Susan,
This is a nice piece.
You capture nature so well.
The fox and her kits
The sun shower.
Sun showers aren't that rare around here. We have a few every summer. I always run out and look for a rainbow and then I call my neighbor if there is a rainbow. We joke, we call them my rainbow alerts!
I love the part about the mushrooms.
You did a great job.
I hope you had a Merry Christmas. And I wish you a very Happy New Year!
Hugs,
Katie
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi Susan,
This is a nice piece.
You capture nature so well.
The fox and her kits
The sun shower.
Sun showers aren't that rare around here. We have a few every summer. I always run out and look for a rainbow and then I call my neighbor if there is a rainbow. We joke, we call them my rainbow alerts!
I love the part about the mushrooms.
You did a great job.
I hope you had a Merry Christmas. And I wish you a very Happy New Year!
Hugs,
Katie
Comment Written 27-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi Katie...thank you so much! It's neat that you have seen these! Aren't they gorgeous?? I haven't seen one for a year or so. Happy New Year to you too! Stay well! Luv, Susan
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Hi Susan,
You're welcome.:)
Luv,
Katie
Comment from Espresso momma
That was certainly beautiful to read. It reminded me of a couple times I have taken off my shoes and ran through the warm sun showers many years ago of course. What a refreshing feeling it was. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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That was certainly beautiful to read. It reminded me of a couple times I have taken off my shoes and ran through the warm sun showers many years ago of course. What a refreshing feeling it was. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi there! Thank you so much! I used to do that! LONG ago...too. :) How I wish it were spring already...and I'm sorry for being late with this thank you! Just having many health issues that slow me down. Love, Susan
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beautiful little piece. The language you use to describe this event sounds a lot like poetry. I think you must be a true nature lover. I've been in showers when the sun is shining but I was unfamiliar with the term sunshower. I hope you had a good Christmas. I did but I'm glad it is past and I can get back to normal.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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This is a beautiful little piece. The language you use to describe this event sounds a lot like poetry. I think you must be a true nature lover. I've been in showers when the sun is shining but I was unfamiliar with the term sunshower. I hope you had a good Christmas. I did but I'm glad it is past and I can get back to normal.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Hi Beth! Oh it's nice to hear from you. I'm happy you have experienced a sunshower! SO neat!! I am sorry for this note being so late...I'll pm you. Hug! Susan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are excellent writing these short descriptive stories. I enjoy reading them. This one tells a complete story and puts the reading in the scene.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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You are excellent writing these short descriptive stories. I enjoy reading them. This one tells a complete story and puts the reading in the scene.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2011
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Dear Barb, hi there! Thank you very very much for a great review and especially for enjoying this. I have a new one called Flying Low if you want to see? Happy New Year and best wishes Barbara! luv, Susan
Comment from Deepakurup
'Sunshower' is a wonderful work.The authors tremendous grip on the subject and extreme narration capacities are just amazing.This highlights the author's outstanding imaginative power also.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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'Sunshower' is a wonderful work.The authors tremendous grip on the subject and extreme narration capacities are just amazing.This highlights the author's outstanding imaginative power also.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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Hi Mini! I thank you very very much for this outstanding and encouraging review. Your comments have made my day a lot brighter! Happy writing to you! Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write and with good imagery. Hi Susan I hope you have had a nice day. A very well written script which I enjoyed reading Thanks for sharing with me.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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A good write and with good imagery. Hi Susan I hope you have had a nice day. A very well written script which I enjoyed reading Thanks for sharing with me.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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Hi Mary! Thank you! And you as well...Happy New Year soon too! :) I am happy you liked this...smiles! Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, susan, a great job writing this story about the sunshower, i never heard of one before, beautiful imagery you have presented here. i enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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this is very well written, susan, a great job writing this story about the sunshower, i never heard of one before, beautiful imagery you have presented here. i enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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Hi Pam! Thank you so much! It's a rare thing, I'm usually, or used to be, outside a lot, and so was fortunate to see this several times in my life...the rainbow was extraordinary! I will never forget it! Thanks again for enjoying this! Susan
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A beautiful vision, Suse. Well written, with only one spot to check:
She deposits it to one - with
Merry Christmas, my friend. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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A beautiful vision, Suse. Well written, with only one spot to check:
She deposits it to one - with
Merry Christmas, my friend. :) Nancy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2011
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Hi Nancy! Thank you so much. I will check this too, later tonight. I hope your Christmas was nice! smiles! Susan
