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December Reflections

Year-end Musings

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Comment from Deb Damone
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Well said Debbie. As I read your work and than glanced at your profile I see how the expression of this piece speaks to who you are. It seems that you have experienced an accident and now have a heart for the disabled. How wonderful when you can turn your lemons into that sweet tasting lemonade. It seems you have done just that.
Relections seem to come at various times and for various reasons...however it is true that the end of the year and the new beginnings that follow brings such thoughts of meditation to many. You have given food for thought and that can start a wonderful new beginning for every reader. Nice work.
Hugs
Deb

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2011
    Thank you so much. Hugs! Debbie
Comment from rashi kumar
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Wishes to you too!
Hope the new year brings peace and happiness for all.
Very well-written and presented poem!
There is an honesty in it.
Loved reading!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 20-Dec-2011
    Thank you so much!!!! Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You're so correct. December is a month that we should all reflect on our lives and on our families. I think you wrote a very good essay and I hope many read it.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
    Thank you!!! Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
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In reading this, you've made me feel so disorganized. I need to get around to this reflection business ASAP.
Seriously, you have given me pause to consider and I shall.
I love your beautiful metaphoric description:
-Much like a leafless tree in front of a painted pastel sunrise, our inner selves can be uncovered and assessed. And then I see the picture above, knowing that it will have new life in the Spring and you new plans!

Nicely done, Debbie.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
    I hope I haven't added more stress, but the last few years this has been effective for me. I think since I don't work, I need to have an idea of where I want to go with my life. Thanks so much for your kind comments and review. Luv ya, Debbie
reply by barkingdog on 15-Dec-2011
    You're welcome, Debbie. It's a good thing to do.:)ellen xxx
Comment from Bellringer
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Debbie, Your story is well written and has many poetic lines. Your questions about the past year and the one to come are very helpful. Your reflective approach is also very effective; it is good to find some quiet time to examine our lives. Thank you for sharing this. Blessings, Hector

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2011
    The last few years this has been effective for me. I think since I don't work, I need to have an idea of where I want to go with my life. Thanks so much for your kind comments and review. Debbie
Comment from manicblue
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(please see below for a few minor spag)

This was absolutely beautiful, Debbie. It flowed so well with a poetic feel, about your contemplations for the new year. It shows your intuitive side with reflections on life - what needs to be changed, what direction to move toward, areas of growth...just beautiful my friend.

I especially loved this:
"My December reflections, much as the sun's reflection on the stillness of the pond, have brought a sense of joy and purpose to my life."

They made me think of my own need to reflect. Thank you for sharing these wonderful thoughts with us all, Debbie.
Lucretia xx

Just these:
What has occurred in the past year, and where is life's journey taking me. (end with a question mark)

In the past year, what areas have I blossomed in, and what areas have been in need of more attention. (end with a question mark)

What might need to be given up to have the resources needed. (end with a question mark)

may involve time, money or financial changes
(there's a redundance with "money" and "financial" - they are pretty much the same)

I would love to watch the sunrise... (new paragraph)

Take care! :)
Lucretia xx

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
    may involve time, money or financial changes
    (there's a redundance with "money" and "financial" - they are pretty much the same)
    (I looked at my handwritten copy and it should have said energy, not financial-oops) Thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I don't know how I missed the question marks~Debbie
reply by manicblue on 14-Dec-2011
    Your very welcome, Debbie. Maureen calls me the spag queen. lol Take care.
    L xx
Comment from JW
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This is a very interesting and very well written article. It does make sense to take the month of December to ponder over one's life during the past year.

Good Job. JW

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
    Thank you Jonathon!!! Debbie
Comment from rchitwood
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Your story is very well written and also believable we should all change ourselves for the better. Very good goal set and looking ahead for a better life.Blessings Rita

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
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Be happy with what you can do until you can do more. Your write it very contemplative girl and here's hoping to find you still in that mood!!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie
Comment from pnkglo
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As I reflect the happenings of this past year I am amazed at the resilience of the human spirit. I enjoyed your writing it was a good read and a encouraging one as well. The photo art goes well with the story. pnkglo

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2011


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind words and review!!! Debbie