The Box
You never walk alone48 total reviews
Comment from dportwood
Smurphgirl,
I enjoyed this story very much. The interesting twist at the end was unexpected, but very original and creative. Well done and good luck.
Duane
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Smurphgirl,
I enjoyed this story very much. The interesting twist at the end was unexpected, but very original and creative. Well done and good luck.
Duane
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thanks you very much. I am pleased you liked this one. It was an interesting contest and I enjoyed the challenge.
Comment from L.lora
Oh this was awesome, so gentle
and yet so full of wisdom, and
of true reward for a job well
done even though it brought
that darn wet stuff to the eyes.
no nits or spags, Lora
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Oh this was awesome, so gentle
and yet so full of wisdom, and
of true reward for a job well
done even though it brought
that darn wet stuff to the eyes.
no nits or spags, Lora
Comment Written 18-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2010
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Thank you very much. It was an interesting contest and I enjoyed the challenge.
Comment from Begin Again
Sasha,
Beautiful and so promising as we approach the birth of Jesus..and all the love that he stands for. I truly enjoyed every word.
smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Sasha,
Beautiful and so promising as we approach the birth of Jesus..and all the love that he stands for. I truly enjoyed every word.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much. I am sincerely pleased you liked this one.
Comment from Cranial Thinker
This my friend was such a moving story,one that once you get started reading you just can not put down until you know how it is going to end.This story truly flowed with eligance and grace my friend.Job well done.Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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This my friend was such a moving story,one that once you get started reading you just can not put down until you know how it is going to end.This story truly flowed with eligance and grace my friend.Job well done.Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much for your marvelous 6 stars. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I am so happy to have you back. I have missed you every day you were gone.
Comment from Sallyo
Touching, sweet, hopeful and well-crafted! It seems such a happy use for the Christmas Box. I always like a nice miracle story:-)
around father
around Father
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Touching, sweet, hopeful and well-crafted! It seems such a happy use for the Christmas Box. I always like a nice miracle story:-)
around father
around Father
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thank you for catching the spags. I am also pleased you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Kym Jade
This gave me huge goosebumps. i enjoyed this outstanding write and the professional way it drew the read into it.
Thank you for sharing
Love and blessings
Kym and Jade
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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This gave me huge goosebumps. i enjoyed this outstanding write and the professional way it drew the read into it.
Thank you for sharing
Love and blessings
Kym and Jade
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the wonderful 6 stars. I am sincerely pleased you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Alaskastory
'The Box' is a beautiful story and one that I might one day expect to hear again as part of a sermon. You give us a clear picture of the significance the Christmas box had for people and especially Fr. MacDougal. The image of people who died appearing has a spooky feeling for me. I sometime sit in a church I've attended for over four decades and visualize some favorite people who once sat in particular pews when they lived.
I wish I had more stars to give this story, Sasha. It's terrific!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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'The Box' is a beautiful story and one that I might one day expect to hear again as part of a sermon. You give us a clear picture of the significance the Christmas box had for people and especially Fr. MacDougal. The image of people who died appearing has a spooky feeling for me. I sometime sit in a church I've attended for over four decades and visualize some favorite people who once sat in particular pews when they lived.
I wish I had more stars to give this story, Sasha. It's terrific!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Thank you so very much. I am pleased you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Readywriter52
Father MacDougal retired at eighty-two. He also reached the end of his life. The cards he found were from parishioners long dead. It was their way of welcoming him.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Father MacDougal retired at eighty-two. He also reached the end of his life. The cards he found were from parishioners long dead. It was their way of welcoming him.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2010
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Yes, it was. I am pleased you liked this one.
Comment from missy98writer
Sasha,
your story titled The Box is very written an enjoyable read. Your story paints a picture in the readers head. What a beautiful ending despite the fact he died. Your story is a wonderful entry in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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Sasha,
your story titled The Box is very written an enjoyable read. Your story paints a picture in the readers head. What a beautiful ending despite the fact he died. Your story is a wonderful entry in the writing prompt. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Melissa.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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Thank you very much. I am pleased you like it.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello good friend and what an excellent entry and thank you so very much for your participation.
Oh my that was a haunting story and held my attention Great work in such a short time. I wish you the best in the contest! Loyd
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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Hello good friend and what an excellent entry and thank you so very much for your participation.
Oh my that was a haunting story and held my attention Great work in such a short time. I wish you the best in the contest! Loyd
Comment Written 16-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2010
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Thank you very much. I wish you all the best too.
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You are welcome and did great! Merry Christmas!
Loyd
