The Origin of Water
One of the Dreamtime stories of Aboriginal legend.15 total reviews
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Kay,
I think I told you when I was in the land of Oz we visited an Aboriginal village, even got a lesson in how to throw a boomerang! This is a delightful tale that you told so well. I love the animals in this story. Excellent! Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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Hi Kay,
I think I told you when I was in the land of Oz we visited an Aboriginal village, even got a lesson in how to throw a boomerang! This is a delightful tale that you told so well. I love the animals in this story. Excellent! Blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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Chey, Thank you so much for six stars and your kind comments; doing a series of stories soon. Love, Kay.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Robin Moynihan
What a wonderful story to share, and told beautifully. I enjoyed the author notes at the end that really add insight to the story, especially for us westerners. ;o} robin
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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What a wonderful story to share, and told beautifully. I enjoyed the author notes at the end that really add insight to the story, especially for us westerners. ;o} robin
Comment Written 21-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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Hello Robin, Thank you so much for reading; doing a series of these stories soon. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from adewpearl
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I love creation/origin stories, and the aborigines have wonderful ones that you tell with such an engaging narrative style, Kay. I love the animal characters' names and personalities. You need to gather all your aboriginal tales :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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said to Bangarra, "You must have - add comma
the blue-tongued lizard - add hyphen
all the way down to the sea, and - add comma
I love creation/origin stories, and the aborigines have wonderful ones that you tell with such an engaging narrative style, Kay. I love the animal characters' names and personalities. You need to gather all your aboriginal tales :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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Thank you Brooke; doing a series now because folks just seem to enjoy them so much. LOL, Kay.
Comment from chita
I found this story to be inspirational and unique--I do not know much about the Australian culture and of course would love to visit but you give so much information in this writing--I love the part how the animals were so happy for bubbling water something that we too often take for granted--great job.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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I found this story to be inspirational and unique--I do not know much about the Australian culture and of course would love to visit but you give so much information in this writing--I love the part how the animals were so happy for bubbling water something that we too often take for granted--great job.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2010
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Chita, Glad you enjoyed the story, more to come. Blessings, Kay.
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You did an awesome job--I'll be waiting:))
Comment from JW
Nice Artwork. It fits quite well with the story.
I had never heard this story before. It was quite cute and you told it well. It certainly keeps the reader's interest from beginning to end.
Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Nice Artwork. It fits quite well with the story.
I had never heard this story before. It was quite cute and you told it well. It certainly keeps the reader's interest from beginning to end.
Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thanks Jonathon for your kind reveiw. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from fionageorge
Kay, I am so proud you have told this wonderful story. The world needs to know more about the Australian Aboriginal Dreamtime. I could listen to them all day. I just love this one. To have these stories handed down from generation to generation is wonderful. Let us hope this will always be the case, my friend. I so would love to know more of these stories.
Thank you so much for sharing, my friend.
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Kay, I am so proud you have told this wonderful story. The world needs to know more about the Australian Aboriginal Dreamtime. I could listen to them all day. I just love this one. To have these stories handed down from generation to generation is wonderful. Let us hope this will always be the case, my friend. I so would love to know more of these stories.
Thank you so much for sharing, my friend.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 20-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Marijke, Thanks my friend, I will be writing a series of Dreamtime stories. Love, Kay.
Comment from annettebda
This is a wonderful story written in the way of the storytellers of old, who handed down the myths and taught the way to live in an oral tradition of storytelling.I read stories such as this for children, who invariably love them. If you do not mind my noting there are a couple of very long sentences that could be broken up a little, and I noticed and a possible typo in the last paragraph,'swan' should maybe be 'swam'. Great Job. I look forward to reading some more.
Annette
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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This is a wonderful story written in the way of the storytellers of old, who handed down the myths and taught the way to live in an oral tradition of storytelling.I read stories such as this for children, who invariably love them. If you do not mind my noting there are a couple of very long sentences that could be broken up a little, and I noticed and a possible typo in the last paragraph,'swan' should maybe be 'swam'. Great Job. I look forward to reading some more.
Annette
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thanks Annette, glad you enjoyed and I am writing a series. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from jlsavell
Kay, as always exceptional. You can weave a story and put a magical spell on its readers. You must publish a book.
I enjoyed this story immensely. You go girl, you go!!!! jimi
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Kay, as always exceptional. You can weave a story and put a magical spell on its readers. You must publish a book.
I enjoyed this story immensely. You go girl, you go!!!! jimi
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Hello Jimi, Thank you darling girl; I'm doing a series of these legends. Love, Kay.
Comment from patmedium
He swaM, Kace, not swan.
This is the most wonderful tale. I love it.
I am so pleased to have found and fanned you, dear. You write such visual treats. xxxxxx
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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He swaM, Kace, not swan.
This is the most wonderful tale. I love it.
I am so pleased to have found and fanned you, dear. You write such visual treats. xxxxxx
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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This was prompted for you, you asked me about it, I am doing a series darling girl. Thanks Pat. Love, Kay.
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Oh, goody-goody! Looking forward to them. There is SO much wisdom deep within these. NOT that I claim to understand them, I am just awed by the whole tale. xxxxxx
Comment from RYME4U
I loved this, It is kind of like "The Just So" stories of my childhood. (how the elephant got his trunk, etc)Very fascinating and very well written, It was a great glimpse into another country's culture and legend. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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I loved this, It is kind of like "The Just So" stories of my childhood. (how the elephant got his trunk, etc)Very fascinating and very well written, It was a great glimpse into another country's culture and legend. Excellent work!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2010
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Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed this, I am writing a series of legends. Blessings, Kay.
