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Passage to one's thoughts

Taking time to think

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Comment from robina1978
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Rating of Chapter 164 - The price he paid for peace
Excellent artwork that complement your poem very well. I like that you ask our attention once more for violence without a reason. It is a free style verse, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem. I'm please you enjoyed the read.
    Cookie
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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A good write my friend as always. Your poem flow and has good imagery. The picture and the words blend well together. An enjoyable read. I found no reason for changes. Mary

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for your input. Your words are music to my ears. LOL
Comment from Ben Colder
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Well done again Cookie. No truer words . I am not sure if you have followed my story Choctaw, but you may find my next post interesting. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for your support and your thoughtful comments.
    Cookie
Comment from emrpoems
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I agree a little love can make a difference. However, things are going to extremes now and a lot of prayer is what we need.
Excellent commentary about the sad occasion at that school.
Well paired picture and poem

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for your support and your thoughtful comments.
    Cookie
Comment from TAB_that's me
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Some days I can't even watch the news. I just have to turn it off. I pray for the people but cannot take on all the pain of the world.
Teresa

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for your support and your thoughtful comments. I understand how you feel about the new I turn it off sometimes also.
    Cookie
Comment from adewpearl
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excellent alliteration in your title
for some ones to treat him - someone
good use of enjambment
strong emotional appeal
with a powerful message
Brooke

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for reading my write. For your kind words and your much needed help.
    Cookie thoughtful comments.
Comment from Moreen's Pen
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Dear Grandma Cookie - a sad post on a reality that should never be. Powerful reminder of how in-action to correct can have devastating results. Well penned.
Thanks for sharing and happy holidays.
Love
Moreen

Edit check:
"Reading news papers,watching that darn TV " // add space after comma


 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for reading my write. For your kind words and your much needed help.
    Cookie thoughtful comments.
    Have a Merry Christmas.
    Cookie
Comment from Veeb
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You tell a sad story of a tortured young soul. Something is terribly wrong in our culture. This boy needed help; he was sick and alone.

You have done a lovely job with your rhyming couplets, Cookie. This has a nice flow of words, a good tempo, and tells a good story. I enjoyed reading it!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. yes this is so sad and it's happening all over the world.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. Yes this is so sad and it's happening all over the world.
Comment from Jackarrie
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It is a shocking thing when innocent children and teachers are gunned down for no reason. The reason you say is because nobody was nice to him. I do believe they cannot be in their right mind to do this heinous act.
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. yes this is so sad and it's happening all over the world. I agree with you these children have very deep emotional and mental problems.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2014
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. Yes this is so sad and it's happening all over the world. I agree with you these children have very deep emotional and mental problems.
Comment from Dutchie
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Rating of Chapter 163 - Remember I love you always
Such a wonderful story Misscookie and very well written too.
It's a wonderful thought, because so many things can happen while the children are not at home. Indeed it can be the last time you tell them that you love them. And yes, say it only when you really mean it, that's a valuable thougt. Well done Misscookie, I loved it. Fia

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014
    Thank you very much for reading and enjoying my write. You made my day and thank you for the star.