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Sept, 5 -Happy Birthday. Mama-
The author's notes and the message of life contained therein is worth the six stars, couple with the beautiful poem about how we all miss our mothers.
Somehow, the generations that come after them tend to have some of their traits and that's very true too. It is as if our mothers have a special fondness for some of them to have their traits like loving shoes and bags, smiles.
Excellent write and well pen.
Cheerio, hugs and luv, GS Richie. :))


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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much, For your kind words and thoughtful comments. It something because I see myself in some of my children or their dad.
    Lots of Hugs and prayers and thank you again for the star.

    GM Cookie


reply by 9999pool on 08-Sep-2014
    That's so true. Most of them will take after the parents or grandparents. It is inborn and inherent in them, smiles.
    This poem came from your heart and hence the excellent rating.
    Hugs and smiles, cheerio, GS Riichie. :))

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014
    Thank you again. Like I said before you know how to make an mature lady feel good.....Mine you I did not say old. LOL
    Cookie

reply by 9999pool on 08-Sep-2014
    I know what you mean. We are not over the hill yet, like they say, big smiles.
    Cheerio, GS Richie. :))

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014
    I know I'm not even though my bones hurt my mind get fuzzy. I have not seen the mountain yet.
    LOL
    I feel you feel the same way... except for the aching bones.
    GM Cookie

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014
    I know I'm not even though my bones hurt my mind get fuzzy. I have not seen the mountain yet.
    LOL
    I feel you feel the same way... except for the aching bones.
    GM Cookie
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Sept, 5 -Happy Birthday. Mama-
Hi misscookie :)
This is a lovely free style poem dedicated to your mama on her birthday.
How lovely that your great granddaughter Madison has inherited some of your mama's traits and likings.
Very nicely done.
Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x


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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014
    Thank you for reading my poem for your kind words and thoughtful comments. Yes she is a blessing to me.
    Cookie
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Great write on a Birthday greeting to a deceased Mother not forgotten. So beautifully written and the author notes are great too! Thank You for sharing this joyful and yet faintly sad memory with us.


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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful kind words and comments. I'm please you are enjoying the poem.
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Oh, MissCookie,

This is a beautiful and touching poem for your mom. I loved reading your author notes and what your mom had to say about "Life is just a journey that must come to an end, so enjoy each step you take, while you can." Madison and her mom Melika are beautiful.

Kat


 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my Pose/ Poem. For your thoughtful and kind words. I'm please you like the poem and my author notes.
    You see where my mind in words come from. Have a blessed Sunday.
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This was a Great picture of your granddaughter, Madison & her Mama, while dedicating this one to your Mama, not here, on her birthday, & still missing her..I can relate to this poem also..As my Mom passed in January 1996 on the week of her birthday. So close to being 75, though God had other plans for her to spend her birthday, hopefully in Heaven...Amazing, how even with grandchildren, there is some trait or the way they act, that we can see our own parents in them.

Thanks for sharing.....Caressa


 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my Pose/ Poem. For your thoughtful and kind words. Sorry about your mother wow to think she is celbering her Birthday with the Lord.
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Nice of you to remember your mother's ways and sayings. This daughter looks like her and eases your pain about this loss a bit.


 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Tank you very much for taking time to read my write. For your thoughtful comments and kind words.
    Have a vice day
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I think you captured the mixed feelings of love for your child and grief for your mother beautifully. I felt a little bit of guilt that you could love one so much while missing the love for the other. Loved your mother's torch analogy. May borrow it if you don.t mind


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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for taking time to read mu poem, for your kind words and thoughtful comments.
    Heave a blessed week-end . Yes you may borrow it I'm honored .
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This is an emotion laden memorial work in honor and remembrance of a dear mother. done in simple style and form. Good message delivered.

ola thomas


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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my write. for your kind words and thoughtful comments. Have a blessed week-end.
    Cookie
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Sept, 5 -Happy Birthday. Mama-
Happy Birthday, Mama - add comma for direct address
good alliteration in happiness has healed
and in heavy heart in in ways/waddles/walks
and in miss you mother
I miss you, mother, - add commas for direct address
good use of occasional rhyme
thoughtful expression of tender emotion
Brooke :-)


 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for your kind words, thoughtful comments and your much needed help.
    Have a blessed week-end.
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This is a lovely and personal poem. It is sweet and sad, but you manage to bring hope into the piece. I enjoyed reading the passing of time and how you bring up Madison and how she resembles Mama. Very nice! God bless.

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014



reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for your kind words, thoughtful comments.
    Have a blessed week- end.
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