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Passage to one's thoughts

Taking time to think

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Comment from MizKat
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Rating of Chapter 171 - Your mouth is a deadly weapon
Hi Cookie,

This is a well written and interesting poem. I really enjoyed reading it and also your author notes. Thanks for mentioning me in your notes. You made my day, my friend. BIG SMILE!

Kat

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful input.
    Have a nice day.
    Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful input.
    Have a nice day.
    Cookie
Comment from Moreen's Pen
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Rating of Chapter 171 - Your mouth is a deadly weapon
Dear Grandma Cookie - Politics is a different type of war, an internal battle of the countries soul. I've noticed politicians taking pot shots when ever they can, their humility, honor and integrity sadly lacking, so I was not at all surprised by his comments - saddened indeed, that we as a civilization cannot get our act together and work together to better mankind as a whole. Loved your poem, lots to think over....
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

Edit Check:

"his weary face,there's lines of stress. " // Add space after comma.

"or, how they say it's political incorrect."// politically

"Was that another incorrect habit for his?" // "for" should be 'of'

"Mr. Rudy carefully choose the perfect time " // chose

"he's misunderstanding comment on black history month. "// "he's" should be 'his'

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my poem
    for your thoughtful comments and kind words.
    Have a blessed day.
    Cookie
Comment from notesandmore
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Rating of Chapter 168 - Part 1 --2 The pizza man
Dear misscookie,
You didn't just give the pizza man $4.00 you gave him a sense of dignity. What a great thing to do for him and for the Lord.
The flow of your poem worked well with the story you were presenting.
:-)Carolyn

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
    Thank you for you kind words and thoughtful comments yes I did. He told me he would pay me back, I just clacked it up as a blessing helping others.
    Maybe that's one the reasons I 'm always smiling and feeling happy for I'm in Gods grace no matter what.
    Have a blessed week end.
    Cookie
Comment from Mastery
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You are a gem, M'lady...that's for sure. Isn't it a wonderful feeling when you have these experiences in our lives? Bless you for feeling that man's pain and for helping him out all the way. Bob

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
    Thank you for you kind words and thoughtful comments. Maybe that's one the reasons I 'm always smiling and feeling happy for I'm in Gods grace no matter what.
    Have a blessed week end.
    Cookie
Comment from Writingfundimension
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Thanks so much for sharing this follow-up to your first part, Cookie. You handled the situation so well by listening to God and trusting his voice to guide you. The result was the man making his first payment toward paying you back and keeping his dignity. Awesome!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
    Thank you for you kind words and thoughtful comments. Maybe that's one the reasons I 'm always smiling and feeling happy for I'm in Gods grace no matter what.
    Have a blessed week end.
    Cookie
    Have a blessed week end.
    Cookie
reply by Writingfundimension on 16-Jan-2015
    I'll bet you're right, Cookie. Blessings to you as well, Bev
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    Blessing back to you and yours. have blessed week end also.
    Cookie
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
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A good write for this poem my friend. You have excellently described your poem and expression is good. I read the poem to the end and enjoyed the read. I found no need to suggest changes. Thanks for sharing. Mary

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. I'm please you enjoyed the read.
    Take care ,
    Cookie
Comment from RGstar
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Rating of Chapter 167 - Finding love and peace
As often it is so, misscookie. We often worship when gone, give tribute when no more, and say our sad tidings when there is none to hear them.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. I'm please you enjoyed the read. Your words are so true.
    Take care ,
    Cookie
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Cookie,

Your poem is written well. I like that you put two parts together. It was
really interesting to read. I hope you'll write another one about the pizza
man that has parts 3 and part 4. You were so nice to give the man money
for pizza and it's great that he's paying you back. He may have met a
friend for life and vise versa.

Kat

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. I'm please you enjoyed the read. Time will tell if there is a part 3 or 4. LOL
    take care ,
    Cookie
reply by MizKat on 16-Jan-2015
    I know what you mean. I never know what I'll write next either.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2015
    When it happens be glad and write those thoughts down quick. LOL
    Cooke
Comment from Dutchie
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I know exactly how it feels Misscookie. Many of these people are ignored.
Passengers turn their head away. It breaks my heart. They are so grateful for so little. Very touching this story in a poem. Well done!! Fia

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015
    Thank you for your thoughtful comments and kind words. I'm please you enjoyed the read. I help other for by the grace of God there go I.
    Take care ,
    Cookie
Comment from robina1978
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I must have missed part one. But in this poem I understand that the pizza man still owed you some money. You just meet by chance. Nice to read this story. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2015
    Thank you very much for reading my poem.... I Pm you to explain what and why I did what I did.
    Thank you very much for reading my poem, for your comments and kind words.
    Cookie