Compassion Cares
A soul can heal22 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
Strong rhyming scheme, fluid passages, important message, and well, just an excellent entry. I think it reads smooth, conveys spirit, and is a solid read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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Strong rhyming scheme, fluid passages, important message, and well, just an excellent entry. I think it reads smooth, conveys spirit, and is a solid read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2010
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Hi again JaCherie! ( What a neat name you have ) But thank you for a wonderful review!! Are you from France?? If so, what a wonderful country you have! ") Susan
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Thanks, dear friend, for sharing this wonderful bit of profound and pleasant philosophy that flows remarkably well and conveys a strong message. It is very beautiful.
Best wishes and blessings too,
Hugs, W ^-^
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks, dear friend, for sharing this wonderful bit of profound and pleasant philosophy that flows remarkably well and conveys a strong message. It is very beautiful.
Best wishes and blessings too,
Hugs, W ^-^
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Hi ! Thank you Whizpurr! I am glad you liked this one, I had forgotten all about it too. And had to read it again to remember it. Boy, that is sad! ") It's so nice to have you review it for me too!! Smiles, you!! Susan
Comment from R. J. Stewart
Great piece. I like the imaginary. The image of the sun, especially where I am now and the inclement weather, brought a brightness and happiness at this moment. Great work.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Great piece. I like the imaginary. The image of the sun, especially where I am now and the inclement weather, brought a brightness and happiness at this moment. Great work.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Hi R.J! SO sorry for the delayed reply. I really appreciate your time for me, and that you enjoyed this one. Happy writing to you!! ") Susan
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Hi Susan, This is a wonderful poem with an upbeat tone. Your superb opening line draws the reader in and your poem flows very well throughout. All your couplets are rhymed and metered perfectly. A beautiful read ! If I had a six, I would give it to you. Good luck in the contest and best regards, Warren
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Susan, This is a wonderful poem with an upbeat tone. Your superb opening line draws the reader in and your poem flows very well throughout. All your couplets are rhymed and metered perfectly. A beautiful read ! If I had a six, I would give it to you. Good luck in the contest and best regards, Warren
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Warren! Thank you very very much!! It's the thought that counts, and I appreciate that! So glad you liked this Warren, I am honored and very happy to be nominated alongside people like yourself!! Thank you so. Susan
Comment from sweetthanesue
Nice free flowing verse, life is a blessing and compassion cares. liked the way this is expressed, has a good uplifting ring to it. Enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Nice free flowing verse, life is a blessing and compassion cares. liked the way this is expressed, has a good uplifting ring to it. Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Sweet! Thank you very much! I'm happy you enjoyed this, and took a minute too, to let me know! ") Susan
Comment from Maxine Kendall
A beautiful poem with lovely flow and meter.
I was totally captured by the first line, Without the breasts of earth and sky ... Wonderful!
Well done and Good luck!
Maxine.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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A beautiful poem with lovely flow and meter.
I was totally captured by the first line, Without the breasts of earth and sky ... Wonderful!
Well done and Good luck!
Maxine.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Hi Maxine! Thank you very much! SO glad you liked this! I had forgotten about it and so shocked to see it nominated. It came from my heart tho. It's great to hear from you Maxine! Susan
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Susan. Wow! "Without the breasts of earth and sky
A living soul will cringe and die" What a terrific poem you have written here! I love the way it flows, free and easy. Remarkable use of imagery here. Just so you know...I Have visited the booth and did my thing. Good luck to you, Susan. (wish I had a six left)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi, Susan. Wow! "Without the breasts of earth and sky
A living soul will cringe and die" What a terrific poem you have written here! I love the way it flows, free and easy. Remarkable use of imagery here. Just so you know...I Have visited the booth and did my thing. Good luck to you, Susan. (wish I had a six left)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Hi Bob! Thank you so much. I am thrilled with your review. What an encouraging thing coming from you. I appreciate this so much, and the virtual six is very kind!! ") Smiles to you and yours!! ") Happy Saturday Bob! Susan
Comment from marcii
Life has it's ups and downs but we struggle through the bad times so we can enjoy the good times. Although we sometimes may think the good times are few, it's not always true, it is just that the bad ones stick in our mind more.
Your poem was well written and I thought dirrect.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Life has it's ups and downs but we struggle through the bad times so we can enjoy the good times. Although we sometimes may think the good times are few, it's not always true, it is just that the bad ones stick in our mind more.
Your poem was well written and I thought dirrect.
Good luck in the contest.
Marcii
Comment Written 24-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2010
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Hi Marcii! Thank you! I agree, this is a great point to make! We all would much prefer the good...I appreciate your time for me, this is really nice of you Marcii. ") Susan
Comment from JeJo
This is a lovely poem, with smooth couplets in iambic tetrameter. The poem had a lilting effect to it and was easy to read.
I enjoyed the uplifting tone of the words. Very encouraging for any reader, I believe. Life should be precious moments we hold tight and close. Yet, in letting go, we learn to live even more.
My favorite couplets were
"To walk alone on barren ground
A heart will cry, without a sound" and
"So thankful is the heartened one
To live and laugh, beneath the sun ..."
I truly enjoyed this poem. I love the presentation and artwork as well. Good luck in the contest. All the best, JeJo
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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This is a lovely poem, with smooth couplets in iambic tetrameter. The poem had a lilting effect to it and was easy to read.
I enjoyed the uplifting tone of the words. Very encouraging for any reader, I believe. Life should be precious moments we hold tight and close. Yet, in letting go, we learn to live even more.
My favorite couplets were
"To walk alone on barren ground
A heart will cry, without a sound" and
"So thankful is the heartened one
To live and laugh, beneath the sun ..."
I truly enjoyed this poem. I love the presentation and artwork as well. Good luck in the contest. All the best, JeJo
Comment Written 23-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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Hi JeJo, this is a wonderful review coming from someone who is so talented! Thank you very much. I am sure surprised to be nominated that's for sure! Happy writing JeJo! Susan
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
I reviewing all of the nominations for the Poem of the Month contest. Your poem is beautifully written. I see why this was nominated for the contest. Gorgeous art work and presentation. Excellent rhymes. I enjoyed the first, second, forth and fifth stanzas. What a poignant read filled with marvelous metaphors. Good luck in the voting booth. I intend to read all before voting, but yours is in the top three for me and I may have to toss a coin to vote for my pick. Thanks for sharing you poetic art.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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Susan,
I reviewing all of the nominations for the Poem of the Month contest. Your poem is beautifully written. I see why this was nominated for the contest. Gorgeous art work and presentation. Excellent rhymes. I enjoyed the first, second, forth and fifth stanzas. What a poignant read filled with marvelous metaphors. Good luck in the voting booth. I intend to read all before voting, but yours is in the top three for me and I may have to toss a coin to vote for my pick. Thanks for sharing you poetic art.
Melissa.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2010
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Well bless your heart Melissa! What a nice surprise this is, I hadn't read my messages yet! Thank you, for considering my poem. I had forgotten all about it, and had to read it again! I'm terrible. To have YOU like it, is indeed an honor! I am happy to just be nominated! Wow. HUGS! Susan
