Kidnapped for Slavery - Part One
A Canadian Nurse is Kidnapped and Sold14 total reviews
Comment from light
Thesis,
This looks like the beginning of a good book. You have done the necessary research. This sort of slavery is not uncommon in countries where women are not respected. I look forward to reading more.
Elaine
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Thesis,
This looks like the beginning of a good book. You have done the necessary research. This sort of slavery is not uncommon in countries where women are not respected. I look forward to reading more.
Elaine
Comment Written 29-May-2010
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
I was very glad to read that this story is fiction but I am sure similar does indeed happen on a regular basis.
Maybe not to Westerners but to native women.
The way in which you tell the story allows the reader to feel each indignity imposed on the helpless victim, and outrage at such behaviour.
I have a friend who married a Saudi man. He treated her like a princess until she went to his country.
She can now no longer leave the house alone, and is treated like a slave. She has been told she may get a divorce if she wishes but must leave her son with her husband.
Your story brings home the reality and desperation of such a situation.
Juliette
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I was very glad to read that this story is fiction but I am sure similar does indeed happen on a regular basis.
Maybe not to Westerners but to native women.
The way in which you tell the story allows the reader to feel each indignity imposed on the helpless victim, and outrage at such behaviour.
I have a friend who married a Saudi man. He treated her like a princess until she went to his country.
She can now no longer leave the house alone, and is treated like a slave. She has been told she may get a divorce if she wishes but must leave her son with her husband.
Your story brings home the reality and desperation of such a situation.
Juliette
Comment Written 29-May-2010
Comment from wierdgrace
You allways lock me into your stories, and this one, with the great picture is another one, I truly can not wait for the next chapter, a great characters, and the suspense is killing me, no errors I can see, thanks again
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You allways lock me into your stories, and this one, with the great picture is another one, I truly can not wait for the next chapter, a great characters, and the suspense is killing me, no errors I can see, thanks again
Comment Written 29-May-2010
Comment from azwildrosa
hate boils in my blood when i read stories like this one. i want to cry, and the worst feelings in the world come to mind. so crazy to think that anyone could think to do this to a human being. this is a well written story and a good one at that. you've made me keep on reading. thanks you again for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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hate boils in my blood when i read stories like this one. i want to cry, and the worst feelings in the world come to mind. so crazy to think that anyone could think to do this to a human being. this is a well written story and a good one at that. you've made me keep on reading. thanks you again for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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Thank you for an exceptional review, Rose. It is a sad situation, for sure. Unfortunately these things do happen, with devastating results. Most victims do not have a Ranger to rescue them. - John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This has the makings of a great story. I can only imagine what an Army Ranger would do to these men. They are well practiced in their occupation.
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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This has the makings of a great story. I can only imagine what an Army Ranger would do to these men. They are well practiced in their occupation.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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The Amir is going to find out just how well trained the Rangers are. He'll pay with more than money for his recent purchase. - John
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I am sure he will. I am familar with the Rangers.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 28-May-2010
reply by the author on 29-May-2010
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Thanks again, Charlie. Glad you enjoyed the story. - John
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You're welcome, John. Charlie
Comment from bookishfabler
Okay, I have to admire your versatility. From your daughter's party, to a crying little gilr who misses her dead mother to a women kidnapped and sold into slaveray. It's like three differant authors. Kudos to you.
What they had actually done, though, was to allow their daughters to be kidnapped and sold into a life of slavery, sexual abuse and torment.
(Don't need 'though, or take out the comma before it)
Canadian girl, already living in (the) country, on a work visa
hugs book
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Okay, I have to admire your versatility. From your daughter's party, to a crying little gilr who misses her dead mother to a women kidnapped and sold into slaveray. It's like three differant authors. Kudos to you.
What they had actually done, though, was to allow their daughters to be kidnapped and sold into a life of slavery, sexual abuse and torment.
(Don't need 'though, or take out the comma before it)
Canadian girl, already living in (the) country, on a work visa
hugs book
Comment Written 28-May-2010
Comment from lola29
This is a very sad story, but one of many that are true. I was once friends with a Muslim family, and the husband disclosed to me that he sometimes made his wife get up at 3 a.m. to scrub floors, and if she didn't do a good job, he beat her. After telling him what a low-life I thought he was, I offered to help the wife, but she refused. I find this type of relationship disgusting and intolerable. I'm not purporting that all Muslim families share his point of view, but most of the women are certainly not treated fairly.
I'm glad you wrote this story, because it will give readers a glimpse of what is going on in our world. Bravo!
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This is a very sad story, but one of many that are true. I was once friends with a Muslim family, and the husband disclosed to me that he sometimes made his wife get up at 3 a.m. to scrub floors, and if she didn't do a good job, he beat her. After telling him what a low-life I thought he was, I offered to help the wife, but she refused. I find this type of relationship disgusting and intolerable. I'm not purporting that all Muslim families share his point of view, but most of the women are certainly not treated fairly.
I'm glad you wrote this story, because it will give readers a glimpse of what is going on in our world. Bravo!
Comment Written 28-May-2010
Comment from kath79
Even though it was quite long you held my attention with this story. How horrible though, and worse still to think that this kind of thing actually does happen to some women. It's full of tension and quite unnerving, well done. Looking forward to the next part.
Cheers, Kath
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Even though it was quite long you held my attention with this story. How horrible though, and worse still to think that this kind of thing actually does happen to some women. It's full of tension and quite unnerving, well done. Looking forward to the next part.
Cheers, Kath
Comment Written 28-May-2010
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very good story with lots of action. Your characters are strong and you wrote in a lot of emotion. I found a couple of errors which I pasted below.
fianc©e > in two different places
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Very good story with lots of action. Your characters are strong and you wrote in a lot of emotion. I found a couple of errors which I pasted below.
fianc©e > in two different places
Comment Written 27-May-2010
