The Plan
A married woman settles the score.80 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Bob,
This is a good start to a romance and maybe a political thriller. I glad she finally figured out that living with all this man's faults was not a good thing for her both personally and professionally. Not a particullary honest. way to figure that out though.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Bob,
This is a good start to a romance and maybe a political thriller. I glad she finally figured out that living with all this man's faults was not a good thing for her both personally and professionally. Not a particullary honest. way to figure that out though.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks so much Joanie. i appreciate you going back to find this one. : ) Bob
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No problem, Bob.
Joan
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: ) Bob
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Some parts of this story are a bit familiar. Very captivating first paragraph. Grabs your interest as to why? An excellent beginning to a novel, so interesting it earned you another 'first prize'. You are blessed.:)Ralf
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Some parts of this story are a bit familiar. Very captivating first paragraph. Grabs your interest as to why? An excellent beginning to a novel, so interesting it earned you another 'first prize'. You are blessed.:)Ralf
Comment Written 06-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2020
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Hi Ralf. I really appreciate these six star reviews of my older writing. However, sometimes I don't remember what the stories were about and have to go and check. LOL : ) Bob
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How could you remember? There are probably hundreds.
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Stay safe, dear friend.
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:)
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Yews and when you comment on these oldies I either have to nod my head or go to the story and check it out. :) Bob
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning bob
I hope it was ok to scroll down your page to this entry
I saw the title and knew I have not read this as of yet
I very much enjoyed the title
your words and thoughts kept in line with "the plan"
never did you stray
once again in this entry as in your other works
your writing is very coherent vivid and detailed
any reader can follow along with looking on the scene
the church on sundays
the personality and life of blair
and yes
the mention and plan of craig
each notion is well received and conveyed
congratulations on the contest
for any peace and happiness I'm glad renee saw the light
enjoy the day
stay well
ann marie
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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good morning bob
I hope it was ok to scroll down your page to this entry
I saw the title and knew I have not read this as of yet
I very much enjoyed the title
your words and thoughts kept in line with "the plan"
never did you stray
once again in this entry as in your other works
your writing is very coherent vivid and detailed
any reader can follow along with looking on the scene
the church on sundays
the personality and life of blair
and yes
the mention and plan of craig
each notion is well received and conveyed
congratulations on the contest
for any peace and happiness I'm glad renee saw the light
enjoy the day
stay well
ann marie
Comment Written 22-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2015
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You aree so sweet to go to my old stuff and read/review. I had forgotten that item. LOL...Looking back, it sort of tickles me to see I wasn't too bad back then. LOL...Know what I men? In no way meant to be a brag....just humbling and sort of nice. Thanks again for your consideration and comments, my friend, Ann Marie. Bob
Comment from daniela.albu
This is a good idea for a novel and the start manages to make the reader curious: What are Craig's intentions? Is she being manipulated,or is he an honest man? What does "Blair had to go" mean? Is it about planning a murder or just a simple divorce? The style is clear and suggestive contouring characters in flashes out of few well chosen words.
reply by the author on 17-May-2010
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This is a good idea for a novel and the start manages to make the reader curious: What are Craig's intentions? Is she being manipulated,or is he an honest man? What does "Blair had to go" mean? Is it about planning a murder or just a simple divorce? The style is clear and suggestive contouring characters in flashes out of few well chosen words.
Comment Written 17-May-2010
reply by the author on 17-May-2010
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Hi, daniela..(pretty name) I appreciate you taking the time to read this chapter. I would be honored if you were to catch up and continue reading the book...Thanks again....Bob
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Just wanted to let you know that it was very difficult for me to vote in the contest and chose between your chapter, â??The Healerâ?? and â??Chattahoocheeâ??, since these two also sounded very promising. However, I voted for your chapter for its cohesiveness and professional type of writing, but I touched the keyboard too fast and the vote went without my comment. That is why I wanted to share with you that â??the Planâ?? offers all the reasons for being chosen as first place winner, in my opinion.
Daniela
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Well Thank You,Daniela. How nice of ou to come here and take the time to explain your vote and feelings. very sweet of you...Blessings...Bob
Comment from bluedragon776
I think a blow job is a hell of a seduction. I think this is a book I would like to read. Good for Renee. Even though she has been living in a loveless marriage she eventually comes to the conclusion that either she would have to go or her husband. Plus, she gets to keep the money, mansion, etc when she gets rid of him. Ha,Ha
Good story ideas and good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 17-May-2010
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I think a blow job is a hell of a seduction. I think this is a book I would like to read. Good for Renee. Even though she has been living in a loveless marriage she eventually comes to the conclusion that either she would have to go or her husband. Plus, she gets to keep the money, mansion, etc when she gets rid of him. Ha,Ha
Good story ideas and good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 17-May-2010
reply by the author on 17-May-2010
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Welcome aboard Fanstory, dragon..(name please?) I appreciate your fine review very much...Hope to see your work soon also....Bob
Comment from apelle
you never stop to inspire me my friend....
clean, perfect writing with a perfect hook for what could later on become the arch of the story...
Adina
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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you never stop to inspire me my friend....
clean, perfect writing with a perfect hook for what could later on become the arch of the story...
Adina
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Wow! you really do flatter me, Adina. Thank you so much....and for the six...I am so grateful....Bob
Comment from Begin Again
Bob,
Looks like you have the beginnings of a suspense thriller started with this chapter. One that most definitely makes the reader want to learn more. Very well done, but I would expect nothing else from your talented pen.
smiles, CArol
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Bob,
Looks like you have the beginnings of a suspense thriller started with this chapter. One that most definitely makes the reader want to learn more. Very well done, but I would expect nothing else from your talented pen.
smiles, CArol
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Hi, Carol...I appreciate your review and comments...i will be checking yours out too....Bob
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Bob,
Your story held my interest throughout and it sounds like a good beginning to a novel. Your ending left me wanting to read more. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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Hi Bob,
Your story held my interest throughout and it sounds like a good beginning to a novel. Your ending left me wanting to read more. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 16-May-2010
reply by the author on 16-May-2010
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My, oh, my..I haven't heard from you in a long time, mountain gal. How are you? Thanks for the generous review....Bob
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Hi Bob,
I'm still around. Had to be away for a while but I am back. It's good to see your still writing and doing an excellent job, I might add. I look forward to reading more of your writing. Take care and have a great writing day!
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You too, :) Bob
Comment from RobinWrites
Wonderfully written and while this might be a contest entry - it would make a great story and a great read. It sounds like murder in the making to me. Please write some more.
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Wonderfully written and while this might be a contest entry - it would make a great story and a great read. It sounds like murder in the making to me. Please write some more.
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 03-May-2010
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Thank you, Robin...Glad you liked this...Bob
Comment from knowledge
I find this interesting: how a woman can castigate her husband for unfaithfulness and turn around and do the same thing.
Well Written.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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I find this interesting: how a woman can castigate her husband for unfaithfulness and turn around and do the same thing.
Well Written.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Dan....you mean you don't know women by now? LOL...thanks so much...Bob
