Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from anabelle
Beautiful rendition of a skier in the Olympics. Even if you hadn't put a picture with the words, I would have gotten the full image. Very well done.
Congratulations on a very deserving win.
Regards, anabelle
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Beautiful rendition of a skier in the Olympics. Even if you hadn't put a picture with the words, I would have gotten the full image. Very well done.
Congratulations on a very deserving win.
Regards, anabelle
Comment Written 14-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2010
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Thank you anabelle for checking my portfolio and reading and reviewing in this work.
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You're welcome. It was a pleasure.
Comment from Xylok
nice. great idea for a poem too! excellent presentation and i really like how you wait to the end to put the word skiers. they fly upside down, i like that, true true, not many do. poets of gravity is the best line though id say; nicely expressed.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2010
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nice. great idea for a poem too! excellent presentation and i really like how you wait to the end to put the word skiers. they fly upside down, i like that, true true, not many do. poets of gravity is the best line though id say; nicely expressed.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2010
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Hi Xylok. I was glued to the Olympics. My father was a sportsman man. A living encyclopedia of facts, anecdotes, and events. He was a cyclist, sort of a couple of decades earlier to lance Armstrong. Now, each time the Olympics come, I miss him the more. I imagine he is at my side and we are watching it together. A spiritual connection with his memory. I have in my portfolio a short poem above him.
Comment from allie0925
I love how you call the Olympians, " poets of gravity" What a wonderful use of words and a unique and clever way to describe them.
Overall a good piece and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2010
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I love how you call the Olympians, " poets of gravity" What a wonderful use of words and a unique and clever way to describe them.
Overall a good piece and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2010
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Thank you for your gracious review and for liking my homage to the "poets of gravity."
Comment from Poetic Friend
Oh, Amada, how I can appreciate this poem! I am also awestruck with the abilities of these skiers.
All of them deserve recognition of some sort. Your poem takes me back to those Olympic's exciting moments.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Oh, Amada, how I can appreciate this poem! I am also awestruck with the abilities of these skiers.
All of them deserve recognition of some sort. Your poem takes me back to those Olympic's exciting moments.
Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you Poetic Friend for this great review.
Comment from shonadennis
I must say this poem was very creative, and the words just fall right into place, I like the phrase white grace airborne, great job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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I must say this poem was very creative, and the words just fall right into place, I like the phrase white grace airborne, great job.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you shonadennis for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I agree with your poem. The skiers are amazing. I have enjoyed watching them. The Olympic Games are so much fun to watch and you have done a wonderful job writing a poem about them. Your poem flowes well and is easy to read.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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I agree with your poem. The skiers are amazing. I have enjoyed watching them. The Olympic Games are so much fun to watch and you have done a wonderful job writing a poem about them. Your poem flowes well and is easy to read.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you Barbara for reviewing this work, dear writer.
Comment from Building Jericho
Super poem. I like how it starts and ends with the same word. The descriptions are clear and accurate, and the whole thing works within the form.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Super poem. I like how it starts and ends with the same word. The descriptions are clear and accurate, and the whole thing works within the form.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you for reviewing this work!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Kaiyah
ok, first place was well deserved. you have followed the contest rules wonderfully and might i add that i love the art that you have chosen to accompany your work.
congratulations. well written and thoroughly enjoyed
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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ok, first place was well deserved. you have followed the contest rules wonderfully and might i add that i love the art that you have chosen to accompany your work.
congratulations. well written and thoroughly enjoyed
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you for reading my work!
Comment from stealth756
In its short presentation it gives you a vivid picture of what your talking about. Plus the picture nails it for how you wrote it. great job!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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In its short presentation it gives you a vivid picture of what your talking about. Plus the picture nails it for how you wrote it. great job!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you stealth756 for reading and reviewing my work.
Comment from fhree
HI
Liked this richtameter, and the words "poet of gravity" really are very good.
This also read very easily.
Thanks
Fhree
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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HI
Liked this richtameter, and the words "poet of gravity" really are very good.
This also read very easily.
Thanks
Fhree
Comment Written 27-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2010
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting in my work.
