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Comment from Mel Keyz
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Wow. What an awesome concept. the 'Spirit' of Christmas. clever bringing it back to alcohol hahaha! So true though. Recognising the spirit all year round is important, not just highlighted and noticed around Christmas time. Great job reminding people of what's right.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
    Thank you dear FS friend
    you have a great big smiley day
    blessings
    Lorraine
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Anything at all that turns just one more person's thoughts
toward the Lord because of Christmas Day
as the Spirit moves within us.
That alone, is a victory that rings the bells in Heaven
and makes Angels sing.

What is the Spirit of Christmas?
It is you
In God and God in you
A brilliant write praise God and you his foot-soldier who proclaims his glory to the world, wonderful poem kind regards Meia xx

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear encouraging friend
    have a smiley day
    blessings
    Lorraine
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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I do wish I had a six star award for this powerful Christmas spirit story. I am so glad that you revived it so that I could have the privilege of reading it. The message is clear and profound. This should be read by all as a reminder of what this season is all about. May this spirit be with you all year around as you give and receive through the goodness of God. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear FS friend
    your lovely kindness and generosity is very much appreciated for certain
    blessings to you lovely lady and you have a great big smiley day
    Lorraine
reply by Brigitte Elko on 06-Dec-2017
    Smiles back to you. ( I love when you end your comments with "Have a great big smiley day").
    It makes me smile.
    Fan Friend,
    Brigitte

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks righteously and in spiritual viewpoint the spirit of Christmas and it is simply versed that it is the person in God and God in the person, no different in feeling 24x7; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2017
    Good morning kind and generous sir
    Once again as always I certainly enjoyed your encouraging visit
    have a great big smiley day
    Lorraine
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Lorraine
First I wish you the very best in this prompt contest
And thank you for reminding us what the true Spirit of Christmas is
What is the Spirit of Christmas?
It is you
In God and God in you

Gert


 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear friend
    as always I have a happy heart when you visit
    blessings to you
    have a smiley day
    many thanks for the awesome sixer dear freind
    Lorraine
reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Dec-2017
    You are welcome Lorraine
    Gert

Comment from Dean Kuch
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You're very right, Lorraine.
The spirit of Christmas is Christ, and He is around us all of the time, 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.
Jesus didn't promise us he'd come around only at Christmas time.
He told us that He would NEVER leave us nor forsake us.
And you and I both know that "NEVER" is a very long time.
Merry Christmas to you and your family this holiday season.
~Dean

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
    Thanks Dean
    I am always happy and write inspired when you visit
    have that great big smiley day
    Lorraine
    LOL
    and yes; it is sometimes "forever" seems a very long time too
    LOL
reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Dec-2017
    You're more than welcome, Lorraine. :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Ordinary angels walking among us. That is the part of the whole piece that catches my eye because there are just that. Nicely done

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
    Barb I love receiving your reviews and I certainly love to read your work
    thanks for your positive encouragement
    blessings
    have a smiley day
    Lorraine
Comment from lyenochka
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Wonderful words, Lorraine! Thank you for setting us right. It seems that charities all pop out everywhere during Christmas but as you said, the Spirit urges us to do good and loving deeds all year 'round in His Name and for His glory. Right on!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear FS friend
    I am pleased as punch you popped in with your kind and intuitive ways
    I worked in aged care; so I DID see Christmas all year round; in so much lovingkindness AND the wisdom of the ages passing on for us to cherish
    you have a great big smiley day
    blessings
    Lorraine
Comment from MelB
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This is a wonderful piece written on the spirit of Christmas. You never know where an angel of God will turn up, but we do have His spirit in each one of us.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear FS friend
    I am pleased as punch you popped in with your kind and intuitive ways
    I worked in aged care; so I DID see Christmas all year round; in so much lovingkindness AND the wisdom of the ages passing on for us to cherish
    you have a great big smiley day
    blessings
    Lorraine
Comment from damommy
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So true and so important. I've often wondered why people are so nice during the season, and not necessarily so the rest of the year. Sort of defeats the birth of Christ, doesn't it?

You've said it all beautifully, and I'm so glad you revived this to share this year. 8-)

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you my dear FS friend
    I am pleased as punch you popped in with your kind and intuitive ways
    I worked in aged care; so I DID see Christmas all year round; in so much lovingkindness AND the wisdom of the ages passing on for us to cherish
    you have a great big smiley day
    blessings
    Lorraine
reply by damommy on 04-Dec-2017
    Thank you.