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A Leaf on the Wind

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Autobiography of abuse

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Comment from Stacey Lynne Wells
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Good for You! I'm very happy about that! Good going getting this resolved and doing the right thing! I hope he stops! Good luck to you.

Rachel

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
    Thank you. I am pleased you liked this chapter.
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
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That was one entertaining story. You did a great job in presenting it as I found it rather attractive in that sense. The them was just wonderful and your characters acted as the backbone that truly made this an experience that I will remember for quite some time. I have noticed no room for improvement.

The Rivaling Mimic

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2009


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2009
    Thak you very much. I am pleased you liked it so much. By the way I like your name The Rivaling Mimic...again, thank you.