A Woman Scorned
Patterned after The Midnight Ride of Paul Revere25 total reviews
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Jan,
You have told this story very well and ah, yes, she gets her revenge! This is very imaginative and well thought out. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2008
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Hi Jan,
You have told this story very well and ah, yes, she gets her revenge! This is very imaginative and well thought out. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 18-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2008
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thanks, mtngalofnc. not sure where this one came from. it sort of took on a life of its own and I just went with it. love, jan
Comment from venusanblue
It makes a change for the woman to catch the man. Ooops accidental death. A woman in a rage. A really good poem, I enjoyed. V.xxxx
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
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It makes a change for the woman to catch the man. Ooops accidental death. A woman in a rage. A really good poem, I enjoyed. V.xxxx
Comment Written 12-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
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of course it was accidental. isn't that what the men always say? love, jan
Comment from Len Lewis
Excellent piece...The classic Structure worked well...Excellent use of the picture, and a gripping and intriguing tale. I enjoyed the entire piece...Good Job...Definitely happy none of the women I've dealt with aren't trying to leave me cold stiff...not at the moment anyway lol
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Excellent piece...The classic Structure worked well...Excellent use of the picture, and a gripping and intriguing tale. I enjoyed the entire piece...Good Job...Definitely happy none of the women I've dealt with aren't trying to leave me cold stiff...not at the moment anyway lol
Comment Written 11-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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thanks, Len. definitely good to leave the women happy and not feeling scorned--LOL! love, jan
Comment from starman
Wow. You are not a lady I would want to cross -- ever. lol. How does it go? Hell hath no fury than like a woman scorned.. Yikes. Mercy, mercy on me.
Excellent work, Jan!
;)s
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Wow. You are not a lady I would want to cross -- ever. lol. How does it go? Hell hath no fury than like a woman scorned.. Yikes. Mercy, mercy on me.
Excellent work, Jan!
;)s
Comment Written 11-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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starman, I have a motto: don't get angry, get even. LOL! thanks for the review. love, jan
Comment from Lead Scout
Pain and heartache could really led to revenge. A reaction of human soul that until now still sealed with mystery. Your piece is really great and pleasurable. Good day.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Pain and heartache could really led to revenge. A reaction of human soul that until now still sealed with mystery. Your piece is really great and pleasurable. Good day.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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thanks, Lead Scout. I've had some close calls on mountain roads but not due to revenge. love, jan
Comment from teafor2
Rdfrdmom2--This is imaginative and well thought
out. A dark-mystery write, and not too far off the
reality path. Excellent story telling with a feasible
interpretation of the artwork. Scribe's offering made
even more challenging by modeling it after an estab-
lished rhyme scheme and syllable count. Good luck
in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Rdfrdmom2--This is imaginative and well thought
out. A dark-mystery write, and not too far off the
reality path. Excellent story telling with a feasible
interpretation of the artwork. Scribe's offering made
even more challenging by modeling it after an estab-
lished rhyme scheme and syllable count. Good luck
in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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thanks, teafor2, for this nice review. love, jan
Comment from Penpal
Well, this is certainly a unique entry to the contest. I enjoyed its content, and found it to be a pleasing story of revenge. Good descriptive verse, and well formed rhymes. Great job. I loved the last line. A very expressive and impressive piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Sallysaucer
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Well, this is certainly a unique entry to the contest. I enjoyed its content, and found it to be a pleasing story of revenge. Good descriptive verse, and well formed rhymes. Great job. I loved the last line. A very expressive and impressive piece.
Good luck in the contest.
Sallysaucer
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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thanks, sallysaucer. I'm not sure it's where I planned to go when I started but the pattern kind of took me there. LOL! love, jan
Comment from TamaraTel
You have written a great poem and told a great story. The flow was well and the rhyme sounded good. Oh yes a woman scorned can do just about anything. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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You have written a great poem and told a great story. The flow was well and the rhyme sounded good. Oh yes a woman scorned can do just about anything. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Thanks, TamaraTel. yes, I try hard not to make any woman angry for any reason. we are horrible when we're mad. love, jan
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think that I could do this to some people....Hmmmm....Anyways, I told you that you don't write bad poems....Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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I think that I could do this to some people....Hmmmm....Anyways, I told you that you don't write bad poems....Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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blah blah blah, I doubt it. You think you want to but when it came right down to it, you wouldn't. thanks. love, jan
Comment from Goththing
Its a bit of an epic but very well written.I must confess I was glad you told us the pattern because I had to read it three times to try and work it out.The use of the picture well represents the poem which is well formatted,I like the theme and flow.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Its a bit of an epic but very well written.I must confess I was glad you told us the pattern because I had to read it three times to try and work it out.The use of the picture well represents the poem which is well formatted,I like the theme and flow.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2008
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Goththing, I was afraid if I didn't tell people the pattern, they'd crucify me. Thanks. Love, jan
