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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "//HE waits//"keep your hope alive....
16 total reviews
Comment from Fritz-Lorenz
What a bloody mess! Truly a horror effect. I just finished reading a mystery where the "perp" was a serial killer who
stole the hearts from his victims, and served them up as gourmet meals for his guests. Also as his contribution for
"Pot-Luck"! You depict that sort of scene quite well.
Fritz-Lorenz
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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What a bloody mess! Truly a horror effect. I just finished reading a mystery where the "perp" was a serial killer who
stole the hearts from his victims, and served them up as gourmet meals for his guests. Also as his contribution for
"Pot-Luck"! You depict that sort of scene quite well.
Fritz-Lorenz
Comment Written 08-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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cool! :-)
Comment from Minglement
Wow, I see why this won. It's amazingly, powerfully terrifying! Great job. Love how you added the extra graphics. I didn't know we could do that. It sure set your entry apart. Terrific surprise ending, too!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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Wow, I see why this won. It's amazingly, powerfully terrifying! Great job. Love how you added the extra graphics. I didn't know we could do that. It sure set your entry apart. Terrific surprise ending, too!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2008
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hehehe thanx lots!! :-)
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You're so welcome. Great talent shows!
Comment from eveeator
Congratulations, this is a real scary piece of writing and so easy to see why you would win, I am really pleased for you,scary writing and picture you have succeeded, nice work, celebrate..... regards Yvonne (ps didnt have a six star to give you.... )
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Congratulations, this is a real scary piece of writing and so easy to see why you would win, I am really pleased for you,scary writing and picture you have succeeded, nice work, celebrate..... regards Yvonne (ps didnt have a six star to give you.... )
Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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hehe thanx so much! :)
Comment from ulster3
Hello Shelley Kaye.
I have no idea how I missed this before. Excellent presentation and very scary poem well done. You deserved the win. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
fondly, rebecca
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Hello Shelley Kaye.
I have no idea how I missed this before. Excellent presentation and very scary poem well done. You deserved the win. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
fondly, rebecca
Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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lol! thanx so much for daring to drop in ;-)
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lol. I'll be shuddering all day my friend.
Comment from Josipher32
Congratulations! This is great. It keeps you on you on the edge of your seat and I thought the picture at the end that sort of jumps out at you and scares you was really original and probably the reason you won this contest. Originality and creativity, two of your best assests.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Congratulations! This is great. It keeps you on you on the edge of your seat and I thought the picture at the end that sort of jumps out at you and scares you was really original and probably the reason you won this contest. Originality and creativity, two of your best assests.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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hehe thanx sooo much!! :-D
Comment from starkat
Yes...you won, you won, you really, really won!! Congratulations!! shelley... That bloody knife with all my blood on it was scary, indeed.... Hey, have fun with your winnings...don't spend it all in one place...;0) Taks the money, and run...
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Yes...you won, you won, you really, really won!! Congratulations!! shelley... That bloody knife with all my blood on it was scary, indeed.... Hey, have fun with your winnings...don't spend it all in one place...;0) Taks the money, and run...
Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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LOL! thanx lots!! :)
Comment from Maurice WA Johnson
Ok, calm down shell, it wasn't that good. Well ok, it is, but....
Ok, so I can't think of any thing bad to say.
Doesn't mean that I liked it.... except I did....
(shuffles off stage right, muttering)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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Ok, calm down shell, it wasn't that good. Well ok, it is, but....
Ok, so I can't think of any thing bad to say.
Doesn't mean that I liked it.... except I did....
(shuffles off stage right, muttering)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2008
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*hits maurice with a pillow* LOL!
thanx lots for daring to drop in ;-)
Comment from Mirrorwall
This is really brutal and fearful. From where do you got those pictures. Those are really terrifying and I must say this is a total different work of yours. The presentation augment the fierce look and good luck
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2008
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This is really brutal and fearful. From where do you got those pictures. Those are really terrifying and I must say this is a total different work of yours. The presentation augment the fierce look and good luck
Comment Written 07-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2008
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hehe thank you lots! :-)
Comment from Foster
Very very dark I loved it. Beautifully done I particularly liked the way you presented it with red on black. I belive it deserves six stars. However, I only have five to give.
Regards,
Foster
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2008
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Very very dark I loved it. Beautifully done I particularly liked the way you presented it with red on black. I belive it deserves six stars. However, I only have five to give.
Regards,
Foster
Comment Written 06-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2008
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thank you so much! :-)
Comment from jlsavell
shelly kay, all I can say is ewwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!...no really great format, excellent presentation.....you should have saved this piece for Halloween...I do not want to meet this guy...this is real gore..clever and creative...jlsavell.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2008
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shelly kay, all I can say is ewwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!...no really great format, excellent presentation.....you should have saved this piece for Halloween...I do not want to meet this guy...this is real gore..clever and creative...jlsavell.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2008
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muwha-hahahahaha ;-)
