Comment from bard owl

Excellent

What an ethereal thought that goes quite well with the picture. Your love is still alive as long as he remains in your heart and mind. Excellent imagery in this one. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2008

Thank you Linda. Hugs, Teri

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

I love your words Teri, you put them together so well. They are few but the message is clear. One day you will be walking hand in hand. Your Jon keeps inspiring you. Keep
on writing.

Hugs,
Ana

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2008

Thank you Ana. Love you, Teri

Comment from sharon fallis

Excellent

This is a very nice and correct senyru. Good word choices and usage. The visuals are explicit, and the emotive feeling is exemplary. Thanks for sharing. Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2008

Thank you Sharon. Hugs, Teri

Comment from luna

Excellent

yes, Teri, there will be more time, indeed. Thank you for sharing this well-written senyru with us, my friend. I know things are hard for you but you keep trudging and I admire that.

Love,

Jen *smile*

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2008

Thank you Jen. Love, Teri

Comment from eraserlynch

Excellent

Beautiful poem Teri and I am sure Jon would love it too. I am sure he is looking down on you with a smile on his face waiting until you are reunited again.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2008

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from VICTIMEYES

Excellent

walking hand in hand
knowing where we stand always
there will be more time

very nice words with worlds of hope and optimism, nice.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008

Hey Kevin. Long time no see. How are you? Hugs, Teri

reply by VICTIMEYES on 14-Jun-2008

just relaxing much of the time, so i thought id take a look, hope ya been good 2 ...

Comment from Luther McDaniel

Excellent

These few words remind me of my marriage in 1979. The greatest moment in two peoples lives is when they commit to God that they will commit to each other, and it doesn't take many words, just I do. Touching words. Thanks

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008

Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from littleones

Excellent

It is that he will always be with you. The image of Jon on another plane...the thought is touching given by the image. Be well and be blessed yourself Teri.
Marea

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Teri,

I was supposed to be your Matron of Honor and I know that you were hurt more than anyone! I am so sorry. There will be a time......

This is a beautiful poem. The theme very nice. The arrangement looked good. The flow is smooth.

It is perfectly written and completely error free.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008

Yes you were sis. It will happen one day. Just not now. Love you always, Teri

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

I bet there will be a great celebration when you and Jon are united once again, Teri. Very lovely senyru as always.

Indy :>)

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2008

Thank you Karyn. Love, Teri