I Will No Longer Wear Your Coat
For all victims of sexual abuse59 total reviews
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Jan,
This isn't only exceptional it is extremely powerful. It needs to be where everyone has access to reading. You have given clear detail of the victim's feelings and then the answer for salvaging and putting their life back together again. Great job! May I print a copy to share with victim's here in N.C. Thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 21-May-2008
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Hi Jan,
This isn't only exceptional it is extremely powerful. It needs to be where everyone has access to reading. You have given clear detail of the victim's feelings and then the answer for salvaging and putting their life back together again. Great job! May I print a copy to share with victim's here in N.C. Thank you for sharing. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 21-May-2008
reply by the author on 21-May-2008
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thanks, again. I sent you the information in a PM. love, jan
Comment from Just a Girl...
Wow!! This is a amazing piece of poetry! Your words where so strong and these words are not just read but felt! Perfect flow and form! Thank you so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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Wow!! This is a amazing piece of poetry! Your words where so strong and these words are not just read but felt! Perfect flow and form! Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment Written 12-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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thank you, again. love, jan
Comment from pugdogy
absolutely excellent writing!!! first I would like to say I am soo sorry you had to go through such a trying ordeal. you should have never been made to feel any guilt over what was done to you. this type of writing I believe is the Lord working through you to help others who have had their lives ruined by this form of abuse. keep up the great writing==and keep speaking out to help others. great job!!!! (smile) pugdogy
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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absolutely excellent writing!!! first I would like to say I am soo sorry you had to go through such a trying ordeal. you should have never been made to feel any guilt over what was done to you. this type of writing I believe is the Lord working through you to help others who have had their lives ruined by this form of abuse. keep up the great writing==and keep speaking out to help others. great job!!!! (smile) pugdogy
Comment Written 12-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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pugdogy, so lonnng, no hear from. yes, God writes all my good stuff; the drivel I write. :>) love, jan
Comment from KelinaJ
What a darling little one! An excellent choice for your composition. There were tears in my eyes when I realized what you were writing about, making your image choice even more poignant. Your descriptions were heart-wrenching. Excellently done.
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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What a darling little one! An excellent choice for your composition. There were tears in my eyes when I realized what you were writing about, making your image choice even more poignant. Your descriptions were heart-wrenching. Excellently done.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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thanks, KelinaJ. love, jan
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Rdfrdmom2 ....
In this free-thought writing, well presented, you have
put into words, the suffering of so many in today's world
and your notes at the end are most informative.
Children are beaten into submission through mere
words and threats such as you have outlined. Their lives must be so frightening and their outlook so hopeless until, by the grace of God, they find a way to break free of the web in which they are entangled.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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Hullo Rdfrdmom2 ....
In this free-thought writing, well presented, you have
put into words, the suffering of so many in today's world
and your notes at the end are most informative.
Children are beaten into submission through mere
words and threats such as you have outlined. Their lives must be so frightening and their outlook so hopeless until, by the grace of God, they find a way to break free of the web in which they are entangled.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
With love from ..... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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thanks, Nanette Mary. You have described their world perfectly. love, jan
Comment from T.S.J.
there is no child that should have to live through this but I'm quite sure you know this. Don't you? you even know where to place the blame,. and I fear you also know there will be a time or two that when you set that blame down, you had better be prepasired to user it. T.S.J.
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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there is no child that should have to live through this but I'm quite sure you know this. Don't you? you even know where to place the blame,. and I fear you also know there will be a time or two that when you set that blame down, you had better be prepasired to user it. T.S.J.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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you are so right, T.S.J. I've had a friend refer me to my own poem now and then for release. :>) love, jan
Comment from Kingsland
you can read a myriad of things into this piece of poetry
I found that it can have so many lines of thoughts
and that is what a good poem will produce
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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you can read a myriad of things into this piece of poetry
I found that it can have so many lines of thoughts
and that is what a good poem will produce
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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thanks, john. you are always so very supportive. love, jan
Comment from Soloneili
All of this is so touching and what a sad element in society there is. Life is harsh sometimes and we can't see all the deep cuts inside injured souls.
Thanks for this. A very compelling poem indeed.
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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All of this is so touching and what a sad element in society there is. Life is harsh sometimes and we can't see all the deep cuts inside injured souls.
Thanks for this. A very compelling poem indeed.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 12-May-2008
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thanks, Soloneili. love, jan
Comment from Lead Scout
Greatly written and very heartfelt. Every words you have penned in this wonderful poem speak loudly and clearly. I can felt your heart as you wrote this piece. Well expressed and good day.
reply by the author on 11-May-2008
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Greatly written and very heartfelt. Every words you have penned in this wonderful poem speak loudly and clearly. I can felt your heart as you wrote this piece. Well expressed and good day.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 11-May-2008
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thanks, Lead Scout. I am way behind on reading and reviewing. love, jan
Comment from ravenshadowwinds
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this poem. I've been there and know how true it all is. I liked the way it was presented. It started from a place of strength, looking backwards...and yet it took the reader from the beginning to the end. I like the sets of words tumbing down, the contrast between each set and how they linked the rest of the poem together.
reply by the author on 11-May-2008
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Thank you so much for writing and sharing this poem. I've been there and know how true it all is. I liked the way it was presented. It started from a place of strength, looking backwards...and yet it took the reader from the beginning to the end. I like the sets of words tumbing down, the contrast between each set and how they linked the rest of the poem together.
Comment Written 11-May-2008
reply by the author on 11-May-2008
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thanks, again, ravenshadowwinds. love, jan
