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Comment from BermyBye50
Shelly,
You have a wonderful talent and highly skilled poet. I love this Haiku. Its perfect. Each line is well written. I especially like the third line "sun whispers goodnight."
Cheers,
Eugene
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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Shelly,
You have a wonderful talent and highly skilled poet. I love this Haiku. Its perfect. Each line is well written. I especially like the third line "sun whispers goodnight."
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2022
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😎cool!!👍 thank you so much eugene! 😎❤️🖋️
Comment from Goosey Gander
ohmygoshthatwassoamazinglyCOOL! I've never really thought about things like that, and I LOVE how you put that the sun whispers goodnight. It kinda makes you think about the connections between the sun and mothers, singing lullabies and whispering good night. I love it so much!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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ohmygoshthatwassoamazinglyCOOL! I've never really thought about things like that, and I LOVE how you put that the sun whispers goodnight. It kinda makes you think about the connections between the sun and mothers, singing lullabies and whispering good night. I love it so much!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2022
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wow thank you so much for checking out this book!! so glad you're liking it! :-)
Comment from Phoenix Rising
evening sun at rest
banded rain colors the sky
silent song sings
Always a pleasure to review one of you posts,
shelley with a lower case "s"
Phoenix Rising
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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evening sun at rest
banded rain colors the sky
silent song sings
Always a pleasure to review one of you posts,
shelley with a lower case "s"
Phoenix Rising
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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lol thank you pr :)
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Easy to see why this won the contest. Have missed your work...been off-site for several years due to medical condition; just rejoined in March, 2016. Will be reading more of you. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 16-May-2016
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Easy to see why this won the contest. Have missed your work...been off-site for several years due to medical condition; just rejoined in March, 2016. Will be reading more of you. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 16-May-2016
reply by the author on 16-May-2016
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glad you're feeling better and are back! thank you susanne :-)
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Welcome, honey!
Glad to read you again...God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment from goldenpoetry
Keeping hope alive. Awesome artwork, beautiful words. Short and sweet, colors in picture take me away from all this madness happening in my life right now and gives me "hope". Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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Keeping hope alive. Awesome artwork, beautiful words. Short and sweet, colors in picture take me away from all this madness happening in my life right now and gives me "hope". Thank you.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2013
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thank you golde :)
Comment from wordsareus
Is this the first Fanstory contest you won? It's a great entry and worthy of the prize. I love the overall presentation.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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Is this the first Fanstory contest you won? It's a great entry and worthy of the prize. I love the overall presentation.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2013
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yuuup! ;-D
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely haiku. Accompanying photo is fitting. Just love the way the rhythm, flow and progression make it an excellent read. Makes me think about the many, many wonders of this world.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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Lovely haiku. Accompanying photo is fitting. Just love the way the rhythm, flow and progression make it an excellent read. Makes me think about the many, many wonders of this world.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2013
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thank you deborah :)
Comment from Norbanus
a bit of brilliance
to bring sunset into life
shelley wave hello
haiku mostly go
over my head in the clouds
even i got this
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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a bit of brilliance
to bring sunset into life
shelley wave hello
haiku mostly go
over my head in the clouds
even i got this
Comment Written 20-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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lol thank you norby :-)
Comment from sunnilicious
Congratulations on winning the contest. This is an awesome entry. Wonderful alliteration with sky/sun and glowing/goodnight. Great satori line. Excellent work.
Have a great weekend
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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Congratulations on winning the contest. This is an awesome entry. Wonderful alliteration with sky/sun and glowing/goodnight. Great satori line. Excellent work.
Have a great weekend
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2013
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thank you sunni :)
Comment from nomi338
Somehow I can only imagine the sunshine whispering goodnight as it fades out of sight. When it reappears in the morning it does so with a very loud announcement "I am here! Get up and get moving!" The photo you chose is awesomely appropriate, it accompanies your words in a perfect way. I am so glad that you chose to revive this post.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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Somehow I can only imagine the sunshine whispering goodnight as it fades out of sight. When it reappears in the morning it does so with a very loud announcement "I am here! Get up and get moving!" The photo you chose is awesomely appropriate, it accompanies your words in a perfect way. I am so glad that you chose to revive this post.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2013
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thank you nomi :)
