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Don't Mess With Kids!


The things children say

  26 total reviews 
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Mr+Mrs Happy Poet
 
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Gray for a Girl
Oh yes this made me laugh the curse of gray hair this is again very well done reads well through the verses and of course I enjoyed well done Ron regards Jill xxx


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2012



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
    Thanks so much Jill for another wonderful review. I think a lot of Fanstory ladies enjoyed this one. Ron xx
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Yes I liked the humor enclosed in this one very well done again Ron I enjoyed well done my talented friend regards Jill xxx


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2012



reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
    Thanks again Jill for a great review. I rather liked the photograph that went with this one. Ron xx
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A Red Face
Once again your poetry is delightful and funny too. You have a way with these short dittys and I for one love the style! Great work my friend. xoxo Kiwi


 Comment Written 09-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 09-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Kiwi for your great review. These do seem to be popular! Lots more in the pipeline. Ron xoxo
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How's it going, Ron. The first time I read this it went just a scrape over my head, but the second time I read this I had myself a good laugh. You're an awesome guy, Interesting Ron.


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much for the great review. I'm doing fine, buddy. How's it with you? Ron
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What an amusing ending. This is fun to read and I like the overall presentation. Little Jim sure knocked the bloody wind out of the teacher with his response. xx Mich


 Comment Written 05-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 05-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Mich for your great review. Nice to see you on FanStory. Ron xxx
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These are great fun to read, Ron, and I'm enjoying them very much. I love the funny stuff kids say and your series is wonderful!
Karyn :>)


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Karyn for your great review. Pleased you're liking them - because lots more in the pipeline! Ron xox
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Little Jimmy is a darned side sharper than I am. I had to think on this one a bit LOL! These are so much fun, Ron. I look forward to your next installment. Say, this isn't autobiographical is it? Sounds like a comeback little Ron would come up with?! Xxx Bev


 Comment Written 04-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Bev for your great review. I'm having revenge on some dreadful teachers in my past. I'm just sorry I didn't think of these remarks at the time! Ron xox

reply by Writingfundimension on 04-Mar-2012
    Well, I had big bruiser nuns with rulers, so there was no talking back. I'm glad you are getting a chance to finally have your say. Xxx Bev
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Hi Ron.
Your poem is Very funny. You also got me wondering why our feet don't get red.

Even though the dress in your picture looks too tight to fall when upside down, perhaps because of my preschool teaching, I imagine an alternative ending that a kid might say:

Little Jim spoke out without a care:
because it got stuck in your underwear

Elaine xox



 Comment Written 04-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Elaine for your great review. Your ending is far better than mine. Ron xox

reply by Skylight on 04-Mar-2012
    Not funnier, just a different view. :)
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LOL..Very good, Ron. Where in the world did you get the idea for this? As I remember if the teacher's face got red, somebody was in trouble shortly thereafter. Good job, Ron. Bob


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much Bob for your great review. I wrote a short story on FanStory about where jokes came from. My solution was aliens from outer space. LOL Ron
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These poem about what kids blurt out is fun. Written with your usual humor and impeccable rhyming. That teacher's is red and she's not standing on her head. Hugs..Susan


 Comment Written 03-Mar-2012



reply by the author on 03-Mar-2012
    Thanks so much sweet Susan for your great review. A lot of folks like these poems - more to come. Ron xox
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