Be wise, good, above all.
Be not black to be immoral.
Breathe live naturally moral.
Be light, simple, straight, righteous natural.
Be fair, act like a wise mortal.
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Author Notes
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Breathe live mean to express breathe to live/breathe life to live
No, this is not a contest entry poem
Yes, this is a traditional Tanka poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables
Theme: Unwise living is always challenged, God gifts man life for He wishes man may go for making and maintaining a natural, moral, wise and meaningful living and experience a living that God expects from man
Wisdom gets evaluated during life (in course of your living) and after (after you die or when you are no more on this earth)
Black means to refer black/dark/ignorant/foolish/illiterate or unwise living
Immoral means not moral
A wise mortal means a wise mortal man/ a wise man
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Thank you for reading and writing a fair or wise review
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