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To be or not!
O My God!
: Be Wise by Alcreator Litt Dear
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Be wise, good, above all.
Be not black to be immoral.
Breathe live naturally moral.
Be light, simple, straight, righteous natural.
Be fair, act like a wise mortal.

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Breathe live mean to express breathe to live/breathe life to live

No, this is not a contest entry poem


Yes, this is a traditional Tanka poem in 5-7-5-7-7 syllables


Theme: Unwise living is always challenged, God gifts man life for He wishes man may go for making and maintaining a natural, moral, wise and meaningful living and experience a living that God expects from man


Wisdom gets evaluated during life (in course of your living) and after (after you die or when you are no more on this earth)


Black means to refer black/dark/ignorant/foolish/illiterate or unwise living


Immoral means not moral


A wise mortal means a wise mortal man/ a wise man


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