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A freestyle poem of my faith.
Reborn by Sally Law
Faith Poetry Contest contest entry


The sun had lost its shine, 

disappearing into

black folds of the sky.

The earth was a tent 

of gloom the day He died.


God's only begotten son

was tortured,

unrecognizable, 

suffocating to death

by barbarian crucifixion.


The mob watched

as if it were a sport.

"Save yourself ,

if you are 

who you claim to be.

God's son?

Show us your power!"



I know what they said

because I was there.

I heard them.

I watched them.

I could barely look. 

Such physical suffering

was too much to take in.


I looked, anyway.

How did you do it?

You didn't say a word

in your own defense.



It was then,  I understood. 


My sins...

had driven you

to this act.

My lostness...

caused you to reach

across the great divide

and take hold of me.

My desperation...

was your concern.


A love so unlike my own,

flooded my soul. 

Standing at the cross,

I was changed.


Something pure and divine

happened that day.

The end of your life

was the beginning of mine.


My sins were forgiven,

and I left them

there... at your feet.

I had been reborn.

Recognized

Author Notes





A book that made the death of Jesus more real to me, and the inspiration of this poem, is still in print. A Doctor at Calvary: The Passion of Our Lord Jesus Christ As Described by a Surgeon. Paperback, November 18, 2014, by Pierre Barbet M.D.

     

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