FanStory.com - Candlelightby estory
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
Free verse
Natural Light
: Candlelight by estory

Whispering figures
Dance in the shadows
Where a candle
Flickers
Into music,
Movement

In the shadows,
Shapes:

A woman's body
In a man's hand

Where shadows dreaming lightly
Seem almost silent,
Still;

A charcoal sketch of lovers
Speaking softly

In whispers of light,
Silhouettes embracing
In a pale tongue of flame
Like fingertips
On skin

In darkness
Whispers
The light,

Flickering, wavering
In silhouettes
Embracing

A whisper of light
On the pale wall,
Dancing

Author Notes
This is a free verse poem of repeating patterns of words and sounds, lots of soft 's' sounds, and hazy images that suggest an impressionistic sketch of lovers in a dark room. Hints and impressions make up the beauty here, and I wanted to keep it abstract enough to be interpreted in many ways by different people. estory

     

© Copyright 2024. estory All rights reserved.
estory has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.




Be sure to go online at FanStory.com to comment on this.
© 2000-2024. FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement