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a dialogue poem.
who said this? by robina1978
Dialogue Only Writing Contest contest entry

who said this?
I don't know
or do you not want to tell?
No, I'd tell you if I knew.
I know honey, of course.
but we are both somewhat ill.
yes we are indeed.
could it be that we did not communicate as normal?
about what ?
who said the Hardenberg (close to where we live) hospital refused to admit you
I thought it was the Doctor we both have.
I remembered he phoned you later to apologise
I phoned Hardenberg reception yesterday
did you? yes, and I asked the receptionist if she knew.
I don't like that at all!!
am I all confused?
could be
or both of us are
let's take the blame together
a very good idea





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Author Notes
Many thanks to bd shutterspeed for the lovely artwork.

     

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