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...a double Katauta
Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
: For Dave by Mustang Patty

When I can see you
Or hear you whisper my name
I know truth and who I am
 
Your arms are my home
Feeling your weight on the bed
Tells me I've nothing to dread

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Author Notes
thank you tekayup for the use of Puppy Love

The Katauta is an unrhymed Japanese form consisting of 17 or 19 syllables. The poem is a three-lined poem the following syllable counts: 5/7/5 or 5/7/7.

The Katauta form was used for poems addressed to a lover. A single katauta is considered incomplete or a half-poem, however, a pair of katautas using the syllable count of 5,7,7 is called a sedoka.

     

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