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...the BIG muse
My Book of Poems 2010-2017
: He who brings the THUNDER by Mustang Patty
Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

Bright sunshine greets me.
Heat of summer clogs the mind.
Need refreshing breeze,
Wake up thoughts, ideas; the beast.
Let him bring down the thunder.

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Author Notes
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The Tanka is a form of poetry that often follows a specific syllable count.

line 1 - 5 syllables
line 2 - 7 syllables
line 3 - 5 syllables
line 4 - 7 syllables
line 5 - 7 syllables

So it contains five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7).

     

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