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...He was hung with two thieves
My Book of Poems 2010-2017
: The Three Crosses by Mustang Patty
Faith Poetry Contest contest entry


A thief
was he
Sentenced for wicked crimes he committed
taunted the Christ to save him
he hung
to die
for hours
 
 
His hands
His feet
pierced for man's many wicked sins
He died, he rose, he won
no sin
no crime
had He
 
 
A thief
he was
but in the Christ, he believed
taken to sweet Paradise that day
his sin
wiped clean
with Love
 

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Author Notes
Matthew 27:38 ~ "Then two robbers were crucified with Him, one on the right, and another on the left."

Trinet Poetry
Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 words

Repeat this pattern 2 more times, for a total of three stanzas, if centered correctly it looks like three crosses.

     

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