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a Monchielle for the boys
My Book of Poems 2010-2017
: Pretty Pups Make my Day by Mustang Patty

Pretty pups make my day
furry face and cold nose
they sit, they jump, they run,
playing hard they scamper
Until the day is done
 
Pretty pups make my day
bright and cheery faces
the why, the how, and when,
their whims dictate it all
rest awhile now and then
 
Pretty pups make my day
fuzzy toes and tummy
the proud, the brave, the few,
navigate toys and such
doggy messes, oh pew
 
Pretty pups make my day
Shining eyes smile at me
they plot, they plan their ruse,
a quick dastardly trick
thank God, they don't eat shoes

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Author Notes
The photo is of the dogs when they were in need of haircuts. I thought it was fitting for a tale about their wild side.

The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stanzas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.

     

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