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Too Late by pome lover
100 Word Horror writing prompt entry
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 Came home from hitting all the stores
My puppy lay upon the walk
She didn’t move, but looked at me
I was so scared, could hardly talk.
I raced her to the family vet
Who checked her out and shook his head
Her Thymus ruptured and she died;
I got her there too late he said.
My puppy’s little heart was stopping
While I had happily been shopping.
 


 


Writing Prompt
The challenge is to write a poem that contains some form of horror or thriller. No more than 100 words.

Author Notes
This did happen, but I'd been to the grocery store.

     

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