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tanka contest entry
tanka suite (blue crocus peeks) by dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

 
blue crocus peeks
from beneath snowy blanket
early riser
anxious to greet
the season’s arrival
 
yellow daffodils
show cheerful faces
rejoicing
in the miracle
of a new year
 
lilacs unfold
their fragrant blossoms
a floral scent
reproduced
ev’ry spring
 
  songbirds return  
to serenade
a chorus of joy
greets the seasonal  
rebirth of life
 
a butterfly floats
on gentle warm breeze
carefree
 children play
on a sunny day  

~~~
 

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Author Notes
tanka suites are a series of tanka on the same subject, but each tanka must be able to stand alone as well. This is a suite of 5 tanka about spring.

tanka-5 line poem of Japanese origin with 31 syllables or fewer, does not have to be 5-7-5-7-7 with fewer syllables often preferred

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