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I'm not perfect
Flaw, oh me by patcelaw
    I Am Not Perfect Contest Winner 

Flaw
in me
now that's hard
for me to see
but I'm not perfect
if it's honestly told
mouth in gear before my  mind
just ask those close to me
you'd hear many more
I'm not perfect
but better
than I
was.


Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.
I Am Not Perfect
Contest Winner

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Author Notes
syllable count1,2,3,4,5,6,7,6,5,4,3,2,1
Image is from google images

     

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