FanStory.com - An Educational Rigidityby victortouche
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An Educational Rigidity by victortouche
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Well doctor,
I'll tell you.

I don't like it...
that we're insignificant,
our purpose unfathomable.

We walk upon this planet,
our passing imprint gone
as waves against the rock.

So,
I have a problem?
Yes, I most certainly do.

Your labels inaccurate,
your summation
omits or retains

as necessary
for an oft biased drawer
already mislabeled.

Lay ego aside
and listen,
you say-

I wonder if you
truly understand
the nature of

the mirror.

Recognized

Author Notes
I can't start, because I will criticize too harshly to be judged...unbiased.
Ha ha ha.

     

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