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Rhopalic Verse
Good Morning by kiwisteveh
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Dawn sketches radiant compositions

of richly variant complexity

on eastern horizon's iridescence.


My sleepy reverie disintegrates,

as golden needlepoint embellishments

dance across intricate embroideries

of misty countryside unravelling.

 

Author Notes
Rhopalic Verse -(from Greek, 'clublike'--expanding or thickening toward the end)

The rules are simple, with each line the first word is monosyllabic the second
word has two syllables the third three syllables and so on."
(i.e. each word in each line is one syllable longer than the previous word)

     

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