FanStory.com - Portly Parallelsby Dean Kuch
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
Why am I so fat?
Portly Parallels by Dean Kuch
    Mirror Poem Contest Winner 

~Portly Parallels~



 

Who's this portly impostor staring back at me?

Isn't svelte, light, and trim what she so wants to be?

My advantage is knowing what she truly is;

a cow – so hefty – not a skinny girl like this.


 

I'm permitted no suffrage, I've no say in this,

she mimics me boldly displaying baleful bliss.

Just a duped likeness of woeful self-destruction;

plump carbon copy, one of my own construction.


 

This replication is such suety travesty.

A cunning caricature, what vile witchery!

Everytime I see her, I ask – “Just who are you?

Don't you mind the fat, is there nothing you can do?”

 

No sympathy from this chubby imitation;

none is forthcoming, as all her limitations

are wholly dependent on all I do and say –

her deception seems to work much better this way.




 

I'll lose this weight if I have to die to do it!

I'll eat – then I'll purge – just to help me get through it.

Friends claim I'm too bony, so skeletal, they say.

I view my reflection but don't see it that way.





 photo black-halloween-happy-scary-Favimcom-1270167_zps0e8d958b.jpg



Writing Prompt
We look in the mirror everyday. What do we see when we see ourselves? Write a poem about what you see when you look in the mirror. It can be as straightforward or abstract as you'd like. Creative responses and free-form poems are encouraged.
Mirror Poem
Contest Winner

Recognized

Author Notes
Anorexia and Bulimia are horrid diseases that rob individuals of their self-confidence and self esteem, often tricking them into believing something something that just isn't factual, and blinding them from realizing a simple truth...

We are all uniquely made and beautiful just the way we are.

As always, thank you so much for reading.

     

© Copyright 2024. Dean Kuch All rights reserved.
Dean Kuch has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.




Be sure to go online at FanStory.com to comment on this.
© 2000-2024. FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement