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So Lonely I . . . by RodG
Lonely Poem writing prompt entry

Desolate
I slither through
the cheerless
day
like an ice-locked stream
past
wind-stripped trees
and drifts
of
shadow-dappled snow
toward
tomorrow's
still
dark
pond


Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.

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Author Notes
"Winter Brook," painted by Charles Vickery, courtesy of Google images.

I have tried to imagine someone so lonely and forlorn he might be pondering self-destruction.

     

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