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A 5-7-5 about a corn syrup spillage.
Sweet Enemy by Ashfallen
5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry

Corn Syrup--sweet enemy!
Dropped. Almost caught, but no.
Spinning. Erupting! Glazed world.

Author Notes
A true tale of frustration: I grabbed for the bottle of corn syrup, it got away from me, dropping, breaking and exploding over every surface of my kitchen.

     

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